The Arkitec vs M.er.c
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 15

Check in by: 06-23-05 at 01:16 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

u said 4-5 bars dog


'nikey' (which means check)

ayto i fucked up..1st battle set up on this site
but the rules as we agreed are 4-5 bars
no bullshit. no flippin, et al

peace... and get prepared to b "Murked"

M.er.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 01:18 PM.

and post ya verse A.S.A.P, let's get this over with quickly

The Arkitec has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 01:21 PM.

This Dude Is Funny, Cuz He Open For Blows Like Car Dummies..
ya Shit Is Old..Cuz Ur Wrap Always Be Coming Up Short.Like Midget Mummies..

Transverse His Text..Nothing To Last..Cuz My Worst Is His Best...
Cuz Puttin His Lines Ona Basketball Court Is Da Only Way He Can Ark-His-Text..

Due Has No Mass...Remind U Of Boys In Prison..How I Rip His Ass..
Cuz U Couldnt Bring Tender Lay-outs..If Ya Shit Was Made Of Glass

Im Scortching His Kennels...And Ill Still Beat Em If I Came At Him Gentle..
Cuz The Only Time He Puttin Harm On My Shit...If My Poop Was Detri-Mental

This Dude Is A Shrine..Cuz I Blow Up On em Fast Like Iraqee Mines..
The Only Way U Punchin Through My Verse If It Was Translucent Lines...

easy

you'll get ripped||ya rec will remain zip||Cause I'ma bout control n shift
Murk a bitch|| only time he particpates in clappin, is applauding my hits
A nobody|| i could throw fists in empty rooms and still leave black eyes
Wreck you quick|| like steel clits it'll seem ya skillz R hard to cum by
Im that fly|| reason why im spitting syllables way above your heads
You couldn't kill a bill|| in a fucking gamble splurgin dead pre-si-dents
epitomizing a pussy with nasty flow,battling flea's||U a vurnereal descease
Boxed out like tha spurs|| only gettin by the ark|| if i let u throw punches 4free

explanations:
1st line...press ctrl and shift you for a zero...(get it)

Voted For: M.er.C

lol merc took this shit far to easy his wordplay and structure made the arktiec look like a 2 year old... overall not a bad verse .. you need to stop battle'n herbs and start battle'n people on your own level...

Transverse His Text..Nothing To Last..Cuz My Worst Is His Best...
Cuz Puttin His Lines Ona Basketball Court Is Da Only Way He Can Ark-His-Text..

that line was really good ... only problem you had was your line matching otherwise it was semi smooth flow.

not a bad verse easy win for you

the arkitec

well at least you can rhyme....sorta.. you need alot of work your punches were very weak and didn't pack any punch.. we'll call them slaps... work on your spelling ....your structure was just wrong... and if you need to put an explanation don't use it.. overall elevate alot more before you come and battle people... and thats werd


werdVote//M.er.C

vote up yall.............................................

Voted For: The Arkitec

This Dude Is Funny, Cuz He Open For Blows Like Car Dummies..
ya Shit Is Old..Cuz Ur Wrap Always Be Coming Up Short.Like Midget Mummies..
midget lines = played
Transverse His Text..Nothing To Last..Cuz My Worst Is His Best...
Cuz Puttin His Lines Ona Basketball Court Is Da Only Way He Can Ark-His-Text..
no
Due Has No Mass...Remind U Of Boys In Prison..How I Rip His Ass..
Cuz U Couldnt Bring Tender Lay-outs..If Ya Shit Was Made Of Glass
okay
Im Scortching His Kennels...And Ill Still Beat Em If I Came At Him Gentle..
Cuz The Only Time He Puttin Harm On My Shit...If My Poop Was Detri-Mental
nope
This Dude Is A Shrine..Cuz I Blow Up On em Fast Like Iraqee Mines..
The Only Way U Punchin Through My Verse If It Was Translucent Lines...
wack closer


you'll get ripped||ya rec will remain zip||Cause I'ma bout control n shift
Murk a bitch|| only time he particpates in clappin, is applauding my hits
okay opener
A nobody|| i could throw fists in empty rooms and still leave black eyes
Wreck you quick|| like steel clits it'll seem ya skillz R hard to cum by
nope
Im that fly|| reason why im spitting syllables way above your heads
You couldn't kill a bill|| in a fucking gamble splurgin dead pre-si-dents
weak
epitomizing a pussy with nasty flow,battling flea's||U a vurnereal descease
Boxed out like tha spurs|| only gettin by the ark|| if i let u throw punches 4free
punch was weak

overall ark took this one, punches were just harder
“merc” ..work on ur punches, & add some personas up
in there also, cuz ur shit was mad-weak

Voted For: M.er.C

This Dude Is Funny, Cuz He Open For Blows Like Car Dummies..
ya Shit Is Old..Cuz Ur Wrap Always Be Coming Up Short.Like Midget Mummies..
^^^Mummy/rap/wrap lines are played
Transverse His Text..Nothing To Last..Cuz My Worst Is His Best...
Cuz Puttin His Lines Ona Basketball Court Is Da Only Way He Can Ark-His-Text..
^^nice rippin on his name
Due Has No Mass...Remind U Of Boys In Prison..How I Rip His Ass..
Cuz U Couldnt Bring Tender Lay-outs..If Ya Shit Was Made Of Glass
^^nice
Im Scortching His Kennels...And Ill Still Beat Em If I Came At Him Gentle..
Cuz The Only Time He Puttin Harm On My Shit...If My Poop Was Detri-Mental
^^OK
This Dude Is A Shrine..Cuz I Blow Up On em Fast Like Iraqee Mines..
The Only Way U Punchin Through My Verse If It Was Translucent Lines...
^^Nice

This verse was dope homie.Lightyears better than ur battle with Black City.Only problem with ur verse was the 1st bar was played.But other than dat....Hot verse.


you'll get ripped||ya rec will remain zip||Cause I'ma bout control n shift
Murk a bitch|| only time he particpates in clappin, is applauding my hits
^^wat the hell.......this wasn't a punch
A nobody|| i could throw fists in empty rooms and still leave black eyes
Wreck you quick|| like steel clits it'll seem ya skillz R hard to cum by
^^again.....where's the punch
Im that fly|| reason why im spitting syllables way above your heads
You couldn't kill a bill|| in a fucking gamble splurgin dead pre-si-dents
^^^There ya go.....Nice
epitomizing a pussy with nasty flow,battling flea's||U a vurnereal descease
Boxed out like tha spurs|| only gettin by the ark|| if i let u throw punches 4free
^^1st line was good.....but 2nd sucked

Ur verse started and ended horrible.Flow was good...but sumtimes it appeared as if you were just throwing rhyming words together.Only nice line was the 2nd to last bar.Other than dat...ur verse lacked.Merc had u easy.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851