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Daubs 06-20-05 05:28 PM

Intermental vs Daubs
 
Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit


Gl fam, no hate.

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 06-20-05 at 05:58 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 06-20-05 05:34 PM

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 05:34 PM.

System 06-20-05 05:34 PM

Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 05:34 PM.

PrahJect 06-20-05 05:35 PM

Daubs's punches can be classified as WEAK-AND-POOR, your style type is BORE Your Threads coudln't be felt if they were SOLD in a FABRIC-STORE

You beating me is like TUPAC & BIGGIE resurrecting to do a VINYL You think you got a backbone? How when I just ripped out ya SPINAL

Daubs, these PUNCHES-HURT im like stomachs my CRUNCHES-SUBMERGE
Till your fill with a HURT AND BURN i leave this dude broken down in a stash like DUTCHES-N-HERBS

Daubs 06-20-05 05:37 PM

I have 'time' for crazy patients, so 'watch' this pshyco enter..
And i fucked with millions(milans) of brains so....................
.............................................no wonder Inter's Mental!!
Like firing faulty greetings, all you caterpult is insults..
And inter, you wouldn't be "straight G".....................
.........................................With bad exam results!!
Inter man, your a has been who never even had it..
And you couldnt take my hitman status.................
................................If you were a crack addict!!

(it is 6lines jus a diff structure :thumbup:)

Dont get personals or wordplay, PM me or dont vote!!

Explinations if needed:
1: millions/milan. inter milan are a football (soccer team) and nameplay
2: Straight G is his user title, exam results go from A* and downwards..
3: Im wall streets hitman and a hit of crack, you get it.

PrahJect 06-20-05 05:43 PM

Yo good verse......holla at yo boi.....uppin 4 votes

Daubs 06-20-05 06:08 PM

werd you to,

gl fam.

voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

MaRVJay 06-21-05 12:36 AM

Voted For: Intermental

daubs:
I have 'time' for crazy patients, so 'watch' this pshyco enter..
And i fucked with millions(milans) of brains so....................
.............................................no wonder Inter's Mental!!
^^^METAL & ENTER DONT RYHME FAM...
Like firing faulty greetings, all you caterpult is insults..
And inter, you wouldn't be "straight G".....................
.........................................With bad exam results!!
^^^^GOOD PERSONAL BUT....I DIDN'T LIKE DA PUNCH U COULD OG THOUGHT OF A BETTA CONCEPT THAN EXAM RESULTS
Inter man, your a has been who never even had it..
And you couldnt take my hitman status.................
................................If you were a crack addict!!
^^^^DIS REALLY WASN'T DIRECTED 2 HIM....IT WAS MORE SELF GLORYFIYIN


intermental:
Daubs's punches can be classified as WEAK-AND-POOR, your style type is BORE Your Threads coudln't be felt if they were SOLD in a FABRIC-STORE
^^^I DONT LIKE YA STRUCTURE...BUT DA PUNCHLINE WAS DECENT

You beating me is like TUPAC & BIGGIE resurrecting to do a VINYL You think you got a backbone? How when I just ripped out ya SPINAL
^^^NO

Daubs, these PUNCHES-HURT im like stomachs my CRUNCHES-SUBMERGE
Till your fill with a HURT AND BURN i leave this dude broken down in a stash like DUTCHES-N-HERBS
^^^^VERY WEAK CLOSER..FAM


V/INTERMENTAL....AT 1ST WHEN I READ HIS VERSE I THOUGHT DAUBS WON BUT AFTER I REALLY READ DAUBS SHIT..THEN I KNEW INTER HAD DIS.....ITS NOT HATE DAUBS BUT YA 1ST BAR AINT RYHME..SECOND WAS WEAK...AND YA LAST WAS BASICALLY TALKIN ABOUT YASELF...

MaRVJay 06-21-05 12:38 AM

my fault i said metal...i ment MENTAL & ENTER DONT RYHME...

PrahJect 06-21-05 02:01 AM

Yo thanks for the honest vote, uppin for more votes

icy-hot 06-21-05 08:02 AM

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 
if i could vote daubs got this HANDS DOWN better punches, better flow, more creative, and all around better and more RAW word.....

Daubs 06-21-05 11:04 AM

werd, i thought i did... but i did vote against marv a bit aho....

PrahJect 06-21-05 02:28 PM

LOL Kon, you still hatin with me.................yo daubs no hate.......it jus a battle........and yo daubney.....change ure sig man its 1-0 to inter.....

Oz™ 06-21-05 06:09 PM

Voted For: Daubs

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daubs
I have 'time' for crazy patients, so 'watch' this pshyco enter..
And i fucked with millions(milans) of brains so....................
.............................................no wonder Inter's Mental!!
Like firing faulty greetings, all you caterpult is insults..
And inter, you wouldn't be "straight G".....................
.........................................With bad exam results!!
Inter man, your a has been who never even had it..
And you couldnt take my hitman status.................
................................If you were a crack addict!!


ehhh....that was decent...the onli bar i really liked was the first bar...and ur structure is nasty as hell...i hate when people do that shit...the last bar was pretty played out..crack addict lines are gay now...and the second bar was gay...6/10

Quote:
Originally Posted by intermental
Daubs's punches can be classified as WEAK-AND-POOR, your style type is BORE Your Threads coudln't be felt if they were SOLD in a FABRIC-STORE

You beating me is like TUPAC & BIGGIE resurrecting to do a VINYL You think you got a backbone? How when I just ripped out ya SPINAL

Daubs, these PUNCHES-HURT im like stomachs my CRUNCHES-SUBMERGE
Till your fill with a HURT AND BURN i leave this dude broken down in a stash like DUTCHES-N-HERBS


naw...wasnt feelin that verse at all...ur punches were weak and ur structure was discusting...ur first bar was played...ive used thread lines wen i first started rappin and that was two years ago...second bar was wack...and the third bar i wasnt feelin...2/10

vote=Daubs

Daubs 06-22-05 01:25 PM

up................................................ ......


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