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Wicked One vs Dizzee Rascal
Battle Rules:
6-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 06-22-05 at 11:35 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 11:36 PM.
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Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 07:25 AM.
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Wicked Wicked
Jungle is massive..... Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket (wicked/wicket) Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS) Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position * A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes *2 I h8 to do this but ima break it down * Under-mime his postion but metaphor of imagery of an under mime postion as tho their having sex 2* Ok basically his gender, optimistic cus of high hopes cus the 'High' bit picture giving birth to a high bitch it all hazy n shit hence the genders hazy If you dont appreciate the plays/meta's dont vote Good luck g EZ |
Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode...
Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll... This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master.. With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors... This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back .. Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers... Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled... Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle... Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title... This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from the bottom of a downward sprial... Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt... Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself... |
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Vote up bitches
1 vote for me 2 rtv 2wicew seems fair |
Voted For: Wicked One
This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master.. With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors... ^that line was mad hot wicked. Aight leme break it down. Wicked one:Your flow is mad dope fam. rolled off the tounge.Seemed like a actual battle. I'm feelin the closer alot too.The punches seemed consistant.only prob was the structure.Everything else is on point fam.Big ups. Dizze rascal:aight 1st off your flow was off alot. You had some good shit in there but not GREAT. the opener was a light attempt at wordplay i wasn't feelin. structure was off also.It was still ok just step ya game up.I'ma go with wicked one on this. vote/wicked. |
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Voted For: Wicked One
Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket (wicked/wicket) aight.. Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS) weak punch Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation decent multies, punch was okay No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself wtf.. didn’t like this line Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position * decent A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes nope Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode... Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll... decent opener This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master.. With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors... coo This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back .. Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers... weak Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled... Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle... okay Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title... This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from the bottom of a downward sprial... flow = too long.. punch was aight Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt... Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself... decent closer overall both verses were aight.. punches were okay.. & both structures need help DR.. work on ur punches cuz them shits were pretty weak.. fix ur structure, & add some personas up in ur verses, u 2 Wicked.. ur punches were weak too, but u took this one cuz ur shits weren’t as weak as DR’s tho.. |
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Voted For: Wicked One
Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket ^^Decent I guess....4/10 Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS) ^^^OK......4/10 Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation ^^nah......3/10 No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself ^^Nice.......7/10 Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position * ^^Creative........6/10 A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes ^^^OK.....5/10 A lot a mediocre punches here.The one with makin a name for yourself with alias is ur best one.U had some creative lines in there.Flow was igth.But need some more heat in ur punches. Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode... Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll... ^^^1st line suked....3/10 This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master.. With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors... ^^SG.........3/10 This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back .. Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers... ^^^SG.......2/10 Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled... Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle... ^^OK.....a lil simplisitic...4/10 Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title... This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from the bottom of a downward sprial... ^^ight......5/10 Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt... Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself ^^SG a bit.....3/10 Too much self glorifing.Chill out with that bullshit.Focus on dissing.Talk about urself in Open Mic only.Flow was Ok but went off near the end.Structure was ight.But ur punches and SG caused you to lose. Vote-Dizzie (VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552 Vote switched -strobe |
This was feedback posted for Wicked One
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