Divine collide.
Vivid colours, reviving loud vibrant notions as the butterfly settles..
Beauty panning out, in seperate wings clashing contending petals.. White waves linger, elegancy is a virtue to this beast of wonder.. It takes air elevates above the status of breathtaking & plunders.. Life grinds to a halt; pond life, tree canopies catch the wind & watch.. Angelic spirit forms in the miniscule gales, into a cream of God's crop.. It seems as if it's personified into Gabriels figure, a pure glow clings.. To this butterflys body, mind morphs to a prophet as it's soul sings.. Preaching with the basics, nature. Spreading lust & love among life.. Releasing the within, of me. Gabriel in the sillhouette of the butterfly.. Shakes off an icey pretence, & puts forward the knife.. |
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Vivid colours, reviving loud vibrant notions as the butterfly settles..
Beauty panning out, in seperate wings clashing contending petals.. ^^^a very deep passionate way to start off a poem, i can tell from these one couplet that the poem is going to be deep. White waves linger, elegancy is a virtue to this beast of wonder.. It takes air elevates above the status of breathtaking & plunders.. ^^^very good rhyme scheme, very good intracate emotion. o man these ryhmes are just superb. Life grinds to a halt; pond life, tree canopies catch the wind & watch.. Angelic spirit forms in the miniscule gales, into a cream of God's crop.. ^^^i like how this is a little battle, you made the reader think. this is very good. It seems as if it's personified into Gabriels figure, a pure glow clings.. To this butterflys body, mind morphs to a prophet as it's soul sings.. ^^^very deep, im at a loss of words. Preaching with the basics, nature. Spreading lust & love among life.. Releasing the within, of me. Gabriel in the sillhouette of the butterfly.. Shakes off an icey pretence, & puts forward the knife.. ^^^deep, im running out of things to say becuase this is so so so so so meaningful and deep. keep up the good work. |
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