Tekneek vs R-Rated
 

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Check in by: 06-22-05 at 03:55 PM

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Win by 3-0 KO

R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 07:22 PM.

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 10:17 AM.

I 'punch' like 'Tony Tarver* my 'hits jab' wit 'jaggid blades', 'fitted' wit~more~'ridges'~then~a~bag~ov'~Lays'

My rymes fully 'sarrated` to maximize 'damage~to~text' My lines pack muscle` your's cant 'manage~to~flex'

'Ravage necks' wit 'cut throat style` as I 'cratered~his~chest`'served' this hater like a 'waiter' and 'catered~his~flesh`

Like a 'bag' on your 'head` i'll have you 'gaspin fo' breath` call me 'moses` I'll 'part' ya 'skull' and put ah 'gap~in~yo~head'

Eat ya' 'heart whole' and leave you 'cast' like the 'dead~sea~scrolls' you 'bastard` get 'blasted' till ya 'head~piece~rolls'

I'l leave you dazed and confused when I smoke~ya' ~herb` Abuse Flu' in boots' wit cali smiles** till' I broke~the~curb
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* AnTonio Carver ~ .... pro Boxer who recently defeated roy jones Jr.
** Cali smile ~ ..... Haveing to bite the curb while the back of the head is kicked in a downward motion into the curb! Thus leaving rip'd checks looking like an exaggerated smile... 99% of victims die from wounds or brian damage!

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nice battle fam....................................

Voted For: R-Rated

R-rated had a betta verse than tekneek he had punches that was hard hittin and made sense and his structure was good makein it easier to read his versei didnt really see any personals from neither of you only thang tekneek had was nice wordplay

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Voted For: R-Rated


I 'punch' like 'Tony Tarver* my 'hits jab' wit 'jaggid blades', 'fitted' wit~more~'ridges'~then~a~bag~ov'~Lays'
My rymes fully 'sarrated` to maximize 'damage~to~text' My lines pack muscle` your's cant 'manage~to~flex'
^^flow good....but where's the punch?
'Ravage necks' wit 'cut throat style` as I 'cratered~his~chest`'served' this hater like a 'waiter' and 'catered~his~flesh`
Like a 'bag' on your 'head` i'll have you 'gaspin fo' breath` call me 'moses` I'll 'part' ya 'skull' and put ah 'gap~in~yo~head'
^^again,got flow....but where's the punch?
Eat ya' 'heart whole' and leave you 'cast' like the 'dead~sea~scrolls' you 'bastard` get 'blasted' till ya 'head~piece~rolls'
I'l leave you dazed and confused when I smoke~ya' ~herb` Abuse Flu' in boots' wit cali smiles** till' I broke~the~curb
^^same thing as the other ones

Just like in your battle with Pen&Paper...you had flow but really lacked in punches.Only problem this time is that ur battlin a skilled vet.Seriously.....work on your punches.Wordplay,metas.

Kid You Rap With No Heart...Like Night of The Living Dead Organ Donars..
Your Pussy..Your Like A Transvestite Pimp The Way You're Forging Boners..
^^Liked the 1st line...but 2nd was mediocre
You Can't Stand My Weight..Like Bridges Not Made For 3 Ton Trucks..
Cause The Only Time You Handle Weight...Is In Your 3 Ton Fucks..
^^didn't like rhmye scheme,but an ight punch
Your Like A Sports Coach...They Way This Pussy Is Pulling Strings..
But I Dont Mean Strings As In Sports...I Meant That Tampon Thing..
^^yo..period and tampon shit is played to death.
You've Been Fucked Since You Entered..Like Women Becoming Nuns..
and You Remind Me of Punk Rock Fans..They Way You Lacking Puns..
^^ighht
My Verse Will Leave Ya Mentally Fucked..Like John Holmes Get'n Head..
Plus Your Verse Has Less Action Than Two Homophobics In A Bed..
^^LOL...nice

Well...far from ur best,but you claim it was keyed...so OK.Ur best line was the last one about 2 homophobics in bed.Ur worst line was tampon one.Flow was OK,structure was excellent.No blowin away punches in this bitch...but still enough to give ya the win.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851

aight uppin this.....................................

Voted For: R-Rated


werd

~R~-ok nice quick key had some punches in there and good flow and very nice structure. nothing overall bad in your verse just come a little harder

tek- i don't like your stye but thats just me..i feel you need better punches that hit harder but good flow and weird but okay structure..but i felt R came harder wit better punches

next time both come harder yall can do betta

v/R