Mimesis vs NaRc-UzI
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-22-05 at 08:15 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

NaRc-UzI has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 08:18 PM.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 05:06 AM.

Unloading a "clip" cause ya "sloppy","untrue" and every battle ya "win is luck"
Im on the "right click" but "dont copy" cause ill "undo" your life when i "cut" you up
The only time you "bust a nut" is when your involved with "another man"
Only when i give you the "upper-cut" you could say you got the "upper hand"
Im not in the "drug game" but im killing this faggot over "keys"(keyboard)
Mimesis must not have "manners" cause in battles hes not known to "please"
Catching "felonys" and deciding your "fate" with a "clip" without "catching a case"
Your "melody" couldnt "relate" to being "sick" if he was the cousin of "aids"
Your an "underdog" in this battle so im gonna let you pray to the "gods in heaven"
You couldnt "beat the odds" if your dick was
"one,three,five,or seven"

Your crew.. newbs who used to spit wack.. but you still do
But you'll have your Rythem At Will.. after I fucking kill you
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I'm being real fool.. You suck.. we all know your a dyke dude
Man, Its a fact we all resist change.. cause nobody likes N-U
Fool.. how you steppin, cats like me and like when i touch rhyme
Man, my votes bring more attention then your damn punchlines
I can rhyme.. i eat lime and dimes.. i feel i should hit the zoo
Narc-Uzi.. Damn.. now my fucking punch is complete shit too
You ain't on my level.. your wack as fuck and continually duck
But,
This whole site wants Narc.. cause we can tell that you suck

Fuck outta here with all your """.
That shit doesn't make your lines any better. You still suck.

If you don't get something, pm me.

Fuck this wack kid..

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

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ooh shit ...my bad....I'lll report it.

nigga how the fuck are you 42-1 with no creativity and just simple ass rhymes,

^ Using """"""" doesn't make your shit dope. You used a sick/aids line. Who the fuck are you to be talking?

But word to getting that vote taken off.

Narc, you're wack as fuck. Shut up.

Lmao. right click/copy concepts. Please. You're mad creative though.. That shit would have been extremely fresh in 2002.

well lets see how the voters look at it.....................

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

umm man i think narc won this....

...o well i cant vote anyway..but then again i dont really get ur punches Mim and i know u can come harder than that..

Narc nice wordplay fam..keep it up


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oops MY BAD!!!!!

this was meant for feedback..tell strobe to take it off.....the vote i mean.....

Voted For: Mimesis

ok this was a pretty good battle, narc u came ok, mimesis u came dope, like usual... lol lets get to crackin...

mimesis - mim ur verse was dope, your punches hit hard like always, you got gud wordplay, structure was practicly flawless, your whole verse flowed well all the way throughout and didnt fall off at any point, your vocab was good... you had a tight opener and closer.. good drop... 8.5/10

narc - your verse was alot more genralised, punches didnt hit near as hard as mims, your verse flowed ok but it fell of at some points making it hard to read, your structure needs improvment, you need to shorten ur lines, by stretching they cause the effect to be lost.. you need to work on ur vocab, overall it was an aiight verse
7/10

opener - M
closer - M
flow - M
Punches - M
Structure - M
complexity - M
vote - M, no hate just how i saw it...

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

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sorry....take that off...i was meant to click feedbak