Darth Vader vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
one day drop
one day check
3-0 ko
4-1 automatic win
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-22-05 at 11:29 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 11:59 PM.

Are you fucking kidding :( The fuck did you have to set it up with this acount for? Omfg.. Let me go vote on some battles and i'll set it up with my other acount, with the same rules.. damn yo

If You Decline this batttle Then Im Not Gonna Battle Your bitch Ass

Jus accept and drop Bitch

Or how bout I set up a battle right now, with 30 minute check in 30 minute drop time? Same fucking rules...

You are a faggot for real, if you to bitch to accept on my other acount, wow

Yep Ima Real Bitch ......Now drop .................

Darth Vader has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 05:53 PM.

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath

You lose faggot.

you lose you wack motherfucker.........................

This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
 

Stanza is a piece of shit, he's overrated, he sucks

Voted For: Stanza

Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
^^why would he get wins hangin round fans?,decent 2nd line though
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
^^1st line was hot,but 2nd wasn't
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
^^Nice

This was a decent verse.Flow was OK.Stucture was nice.Didn't like that 1st. line.When you said wins....did you mean wind?If so....then in the verse,you shoulda put "win/wind" so we'd get it.But still....a good verse.

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
^^^Nice name play
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
^^^didn't like this verse,1st line was rhymed words thrown together
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
^^too basic and weak

You started off excellent....but then faded.That steal a win/jack shit line would have been decent if put together better.And that last line was too basic and straightfoward.

Vote-Stanza(vote in link below)

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851

Umm Damn Dog I Jus ripped you A New Asshole LOL

So STFU ...Lets Keep the votes Comin

and Oh Yeah Thanx Trini

Lmfao, herb vote, you suck kid, seriously, your not good, so go suck a dick