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H-N-I-C 06-22-05 08:12 AM

I Write
 
On lonely nights I WRITE
I WRITE
in order to keep myself company
which in turn forces my paper to enjoy my pen's company

On rainy days I WRITE
I WRITE
so that the joy that illuminates my soul
when I put my pen to the page will sweep dark clouds away

On sleepless nights I WRITE
I WRITE
because the serene scene of seeing me vibe
while I scribe soothe's my soul to sleep

When I hate I WRITE
I WRITE
so that the spite I'm feelin
will realease itself from my spirit

When I love I WRITE
I WRITE
so that this love that I feel
will be portrayed thru pen and page as his ink caressess her paper

During times happy and sad I WRITE
I WRITE
so that my feelings can be conveyed and displayed
onto this page which becomes a collage of my emotions

When I'm uninspired I WRITE
I WRITE
with no thoughts fueling my pen's fire
giving it the opportunity to write it's own path

At all times I WRITE
I WRITE
at all times so that within these lines
the lines of time don't get lost
So that the years that seem to pass at warp speed
and the seconds that seem to last an eternity
are captured with the stroke of my pen

I WRITE...FOR I AM A POET

H-N-I-C 06-22-05 03:22 PM

uppin..........................

H-N-I-C 06-23-05 07:39 AM

I see u lookin....go ahead and leave feed

fluidmoon 06-24-05 10:33 AM

Haha this was dope, so true too, i can relate to this poem as i think others will, i like the set-up of it and how you presented it.Nice vocab,metaphors, this was a true piece, had style and all, and was also universal in the fact that other poets can read it and understand, good shit man..keep dropping.1

DQ 06-24-05 10:38 AM

True spirit of a poet right here, can definitely feel what you are saying and I love how you divided it into all these different situations and scenes, it just adds something extra to the piece. I totally feel the same way actually, some people ask me: why do you write? And it's not always easy to explain it to someone who doesn't feel the same way but this sums it up!

H-N-I-C 06-25-05 07:36 AM

Thanks for the feed...I'm blushing....

~*Khatharsis*~ 06-25-05 12:38 PM

this was nice, i like how you wrote this, i can relate to this in a way also. this is kind of similar to mines. *Speaking Silently*, its all about poetry and how i write and i think that this is telling me the same message. i like the flow, good wording. really an outstanding piece. 9/10

H-N-I-C 06-26-05 03:04 PM

uppin this...................

H-N-I-C 07-02-05 12:54 AM

up and away......................

chip 07-20-05 01:57 PM

I haven't seen anyone write like that in a while. I was feelin' it cuz I could relate. It was sick; i'll be lookin' for somethin' else from u.


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