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GOTTA MAKE IT ( AUDIO) leave somethin
GOTTA MAKE IT
hit da link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/broyao_music.htm tell me what yall think and shyt holla back at me one |
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ummm...
i can barely understand you...flow is off its very choppy....there is like no delivery....it osunds like ya reading of a piece of paper. hook-isnt catchy or good at all return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196325 |
...im rhymin to da snare drum, if you listen closely, there is a rhyme every snare
but ima check ya shyt out |
god damn be..this shit sounds horrible ..you on beat but you sound horrible son..no mic presence what so ever...change up that wack ass emotion you tryna come wit shit sounds like you cryin...and as if you talkin slow minded...damn...keep practicin writin befoer you spit kid...1ne.
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cryin, what da fuck? aigh whateva yo, do you
yea i spit it slow, but i made a couple otha songs, where i spit it quick mayb ill drop that shyt, probabl not tho holla dog |
listening:
Beat is dope...voice sounds fucking weird...wheres the flow...damn u sound weird...is that ur real voice?...what beat is this...cuz its dope as fuck...lyrics are wack...no hate but elevate |
i cut my last verse out, which was probabl da sickest, but its whateva,
yea i got that much bass in my voice dog da beat is live by da gun, by tony yayo yea da shyt is heat |
You don't have to reply to every peice of feedback you get... unless you want yo shit locked :thumbup:
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aigh yo, jus tryna see da reasonin, ya know what i mean
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