Black City vs phive
 

Battle Rules:

10 LINES
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-25-05 at 02:18 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Black City has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 02:19 PM.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 02:23 PM.

your new ta rv so imma take it easy man,
fuck punchin you wit a fist, imma smack you wit my hand,
over and over again you try ta freestyle, you gave me 3 days ta drag yo ass a mile, im here ta say wutt im thinkin, smoking blunts and hittin puss while im drinkin, its time ta die its time ta sleep dude, im the one that puts niggaz in a bad mood, cuz im real rude, i lay mutha fuckas out like a mad nuke,
my lyrics are professional like phd's, i rip through tracks and flake emcees, like dmc,face it man you cant beat me homie im phive so dont fuck wit me,

look...5 bars and im done wit anotha emcee, peep



black back on dat bully shit, set up wack emcees and drop bee hives
call me 'infinite', cuz on a number line im 'too far ahead of phive' (five)

in dis battle im 'eatin you', phive a 'sandwich' and i guess im 'robust'
cuz my punchlines stack lumps on ya forehead like they was 'cold cuts'

you bust what? no gunz nigga, wit ya 'rat paws' you got 'no luck'
and plus you ugly, hoes dont let you 'come in' like 'young buck'

so go ahead and put ya best verse up and watch how one of my bars squash it
and as for votes for you, its like a 'picky fly', you 'dont get shit!'

so now im done wit dis coward, phive is finally dismissed
and yall know i won like you knew it was R.Kelly's piss

lmao

DONT GET IT...DONT VOTE AT ALL

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Voted For: Black City

your new ta rv so imma take it easy man,
fuck punchin you wit a fist, imma smack you wit my hand,
over and over again you try ta freestyle, you gave me 3 days ta drag yo ass a mile, im here ta say wutt im thinkin, smoking blunts and hittin puss while im drinkin, its time ta die its time ta sleep dude, im the one that puts niggaz in a bad mood, cuz im real rude, i lay mutha fuckas out like a mad nuke,
my lyrics are professional like phd's, i rip through tracks and flake emcees, like dmc,face it man you cant beat me homie im phive so dont fuck wit me,

^^LOl...I ain't breakin ya verse down.Ya shit suked.Structure ya verse so we can see the punchlines.And wat's that shit bout u put people in a bad mood cause ur rude?I'll see old men at retirement homes diss better than dat.


black back on dat bully shit, set up wack emcees and drop bee hives
call me 'infinite', cuz on a number line im 'too far ahead of phive' (five)
^^^^nice meta
in dis battle im 'eatin you', phive a 'sandwich' and i guess im 'robust'
cuz my punchlines stack lumps on ya forehead like they was 'cold cuts'
^^nice
you bust what? no gunz nigga, wit ya 'rat paws' you got 'no luck'
and plus you ugly, hoes dont let you 'come in' like 'young buck'
^^nah....ya worst line but still mediocre
so go ahead and put ya best verse up and watch how one of my bars squash it
and as for votes for you, its like a 'picky fly', you 'dont get shit!'
^^sad thing about this was that it true.Nice simile
so now im done wit dis coward, phive is finally dismissed
and yall know i won like you knew it was R.Kelly's piss
^^^OK

Ur worst line was that yung buck one...but that was still decent.Only thing is that u wasted some excellent punchlines on this nood who probably doesn't know wat a punchline is.Flow was good in this verse.One-sided battle.

Vote-Black City(vote in link below,this a different link from one I put in other battle you had with other guy)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194845

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851

Voted For: Black City

Black City won this battle
He won by default his opponent was garbage

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Voted For: Black City

black ur lines were kinda played lose the ' flow is basic up ur vocab get some metas theyre non existant need more personals
5 ur flow sucks ass punches syck up ur vocab learn to flow use soe good personals u need work all around

This was feedback posted for phive
 

phive is wackkkkkkkkkkkkkk, pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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