**Clap Back** (Doc Murder diss)
 

Talking: Documented Murder? Yo I thought we were cool, I guess not man, This the clap back.....faggot ass bitches


Yo man yall beefin over when I went to RAW from doc murder,
Yo get a life, go to mac donalds and get a cock burger,
Kon up in there askin the question do u want fries with that,
Well Im askin you the question, are you ready for the clap back,
I guess the answer is...................................i guess not,
Yall got three members..................and you think yall hot?,
Yall been runnin for couple months, aint got ure own space,
Aint got nothin to say, the cat got ure tongue?, lost ure taste?
The only reason youre takin time dissin Intermental,
Cos youre best member left, aint that right konfidential,
Yo man im jus wonderin, yall cant rap but yall tryna battle another crew,
I tagged you along like a stray puppy, now Im disowning you*
You think you could diss me? you tried, you failed in ure diss,
Damn this takes the piss, not 1 positive feedbak, no1 feelin ure shit,
Souljah and J-deezy rep your crew, but what souljah wants to leave, aint that true,
Haha, you dont even know what goin on, you think u leader but u aint got no clue,
Yall droppin disses n shit, but no1 gives a fuck what doc.murder do
Yall wanna know why u failed, ask sabotage he left yall too,
Yo you say u disownin the weak members, but yall still there,
RAW for life bitch........................clap back if you dare

Talking: Clap back bitches, aint got nothing on me....................hoes

*Disowning you- name of the whack diss track they put out

yo...this was hot...nice punches,nice flow....and u killed doc murders lol.......
structure was thinght....gd...nothing bad to say,but ofcourse not cauze his raw....
keep this up man :thumbup:

thanks man.....yo kon look at this.....yo ass gettin ronked on

truthfully... i didn't like either one... this one was a lil better but they both were pretty simple...ehhh... no hate... i just call it like i see it

it wasnt that great but it was cool.......

Thanks....i know it wasnt a great diss but it jus clappin back to them.....did it in couple minutes.....

Ok Diss....Some parts was tite some punches were actually decent but shit like

Yo get a life, go to mac donalds and get a cock burger,
Kon up in there askin the question do u want fries with that,

Look like nursery shit right there...wasnt really hard hittin

ok diss i guess

uppin.....thanks for the feed.....

upppin..............

upppppppin.....

uppin dis..........

pretty solid diss punches were okay could been harder but i cant be mad at this flow was real good some part of the rhyme were kinda basic but i still liked it 7/10 good shit homie

this was a decent drop nothin too speical in my opinion...the rhyme scheme was nice...some decent punches in there and a couple personals ive managed to search around the site and find out about..not a bad diss...keep the ink spillin...

return the favor please..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196448

thanks konfused and militant....RTF rite now