Broken Friendz
 

Why are you going to hate when you don’t even know what’s going on?
Did I do something that drastically wrong?
I’m sorry your so controlling I’m sorry your so gone, but
I gotta tell you its getting old and my emotions are raw.
Man how could you do this to me, we’ve known each other since we were 3.
Now somethin stupid gonna rip us apart, like a dog that is just starting to bark

You better step back b4 I unleash my wrath
My words, are gonna be up in ya back.
I can’t tell you how much you hurt me,
by saying stuff and talkin constantly
I just want you to know, ur still a friend, even if
I wasn’t good enough then.

What did I do to deserve this discredit? Its not all about you u know,
so don’t even sweat it.
So what we can’t drop to your beck and call, give me a reason and I’ll
turn em all
Against you, so I won’t have to mince, you don’t understand the hurt
You told me your words, I broke out in a shake, cuz betrayin a friend
is like handling a snake
Docile until they are threatened upon, then STRIKE, it hurts, the wound
maybe gone.
But the memory is still there, I can see the lil tear, not once have I shot you
down or blown your world up till you were upside down

You better step back b4 I unleash my wrath
My words, are gonna be up in ya back.
I can’t tell you how much you hurt me,
by saying stuff and talkin constantly
I just want you to know, ur still a friend, even if
I wasn’t good enough then.

Your not the first one, so that makes my words tougher, cuz friendships
broken make people suffer.
You probably don’t understand since you were likeable and all
Since when did you start become so controlling and a know it all?
Please tell me it was just some words not just “how you felt”, cuz I explained
it all out to you, everything I dealt.
Still wasn’t good enough, what you need a funeral?
I can’t provide all my time to little stupid rituals.
So please, understand, that time is precious, take it when you can.
You had me and let me go, just need to let you know.

You better step back b4 I unleash my wrath
My words, are gonna be up in ya back.
I can’t tell you how much you hurt me,
by saying stuff and talkin constantly
I just want you to know, ur still a friend, even if
I wasn’t good enough then

this was good, GREAT use of emotion in this, structure was good and i could follow it better than others you posted, keep up the good work babe

Uppin, this was true to mah life, stuff just really went down like around 10:30. Rage is funny.

Gonna up 4 all ya'll today. Holla!