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"An Establishment Party!!"
WERD!!!
Quick point, I think I got everyobdy on the roster somewhere in here, apologies if I didn't though!! :shoot: "An Establishment Party!!" An Open Mic by King Solo. OPENER The most dominant crew is here, but before we pick a crew to smash.. We gotta celebrate like only we know how……a crazy ass party bash.. MOMENT OF SILENCE First we remember the lost, Soul carves in a headstone with a chisel.. “A soldier killed by SPuL’s jizz……here lies the warrior, Ltizzle”.. A moment of silence for our fallen member, no one makes a sound.. Leave Tizzle to rest as a King, amongst crews we’ve put in the ground.. PARTY TIME Kick the party off with some music, then we break out the beer kegs.. And JTR is already on the slip ‘n’ slide sliding into a hoe with spread legs.. Got Lady Fiya, Drama Queen and Tweety puttin on a mud wrestlin exhibition.. Whilst DeadlyVision heads off with hoes to shoot off his sexual ammunition.. Drakel’s on the dance floor bustin moves, Wet Willy tries to steal the show.. So Drakel shoves a vacuum hose up willy’s ass and switches it on blow.. OH NO! Already got ‘6 Feet’ crashers, their numbers are lookin thin though.. Beat their asses and take ‘em upstairs and then toss ‘em outta the window.. Solo and 9th sneak up and grab Flow Intelligent who’s completely unaware.. Then strap a load of fireworks to him and blast his ass high up in the air.. Some RV herbz roll up talking shit at us like a bunch of E.Ghost Haterz.. So JTR goes into his Vader mode and goes psycho with his lightsaber.. There’s Skriptz and E.C straight chillin smoking up their rolls of grass.. And hotshh! And spektikul playin strip poker surrounded by tits ‘n’ ass.. CARMA SUTRA and LAWD HAVE MERCY are freestylin on the mic.. Acuity rolls a bowling ball into Skitzo’s nuts and everyone yells “STRIKE!”.. SPuL’s looking to kill someone else so he’s searching for shit to jack off to.. And Kon is contemplating a regular thought, “should I start another crew?”.. Enygma and Triple_N arrive late, but they bringin the hoes in masses.. Invektive torches Phoenix and says “I wonder if he’ll rise from the ashes?”.. Phorge and Common decide to recite poetry but CritiC blasts their ass.. And over in the corner of the room Propain’s getting high of nitrogen gas.. Use Apostrophe and DaCument as bouncers looking mad ‘n’ mean.. And Soul’s got hoes for some group sex on a ma’fuckin trampoline!!.. CLOSER That’s the shit right there, if you aint Established then you aint gettin’ ‘nun.. Cuz whilst y’all bitchez goin’ home the Establishment Party is far from done!!.. LINK: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196457 |
Good feel good track....make it in audio homie....RTF to any of the links in sig....i reccoment "realest shit ever written"
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this was nice man... liked it alot, nice job REP THE ESTABLISHMENT... dope OM fam keep droppin em flow was decernt vocab was good humour was funny made me laugh in some parts.. liked it alot pz
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Nice one, funny piece again, repping TE to the fullest and lmao @ me mud wrestling with Lady Fiya n Tweety. There's gonna be some touchy touchy in that one haha
Flow was dope, vocab and all that was aight, good reppin everyone's name in there! |
hahahaha nice one
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lol...solo's gonna be in a new crew next week...and ur ryhme scheme is still noobish..
lol @ beer kegs...spread legs....step ya rap game up fam |
HA! you're funny ain't ya marv.........
the whole concept of the OM is on humour, not on fuckin complexity you dumb fuck and how you gone tell me to step up my game.....LMAO!!! i've beat you twice and didn't you lose to sumone who fuckin no-showed against ya get tha fuck outta here!! :shoot: |
..thought you left...
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..guess no1 can resist RV.. |
It was a good Piece for the Most part, The Thing I thought was fucken funny was that you didnt even mention Your Fagget Leader Redbull aka Soul rebel, or whatever, except for the last line of the OM, and it reads like you just edited in.. LOL..
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step ur rap game up and when did i lose 2 a no show????...check my battle stats dick brain |
thats cuz you got it switched dumb fuck
but originally you had a battle where the person no-showed and still got the win.... thats why there was a thread made about it in LL dumb fuck......... |
LOL! Yo this was raw. I liked the concept of this and the idea was a really nice one for an open mic. Way to rep TE too man :thumbup:
Anyway, there were alot of bars in here that were quotable. Heres a few.. Drakel’s on the dance floor bustin moves, Wet Willy tries to steal the show.. So Drakel shoves a vacuum hose up willy’s ass and switches it on blow.. Haha! I liked this. It made me laugh. First we remember the lost, Soul carves in a headstone with a chisel.. “A soldier killed by SPuL’s jizz……here lies the warrior, Ltizzle”.. LMFAO! This shit was fucking great right here. Nice shit man. Phorge and Common decide to recite poetry but CritiC blasts their ass.. And over in the corner of the room Propain’s getting high of nitrogen gas.. This was tight. I was feeling this because it flowed and it was on point. Nice shit here. ------------------------ Good overall verse man. Good shit and keep em coming. |
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