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Black City vs Verbal Shoota
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-23-05 at 12:42 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Black City has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 12:13 PM.
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Verbal Shoota has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 12:25 PM.
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dude its not cool to ga and do tha type of shit dat you do
you must have a 'disese', 'RAW' is tha fuckin name of ya crew! Tephlon? please dont tell me dats a name ya niggaz gave you cuz ya flow aint strong, i dont have to shoot, i can easily punch thru i heard dat you was a bitch and when you lose you be gettin niggaz dq'd what type of shit is dat? what a pussy, now tha RV know its true but whateva, nigga imma win dis one here, you gettin mad? maybe but before dat happen 'clean ya act up' cuz like ya location you a 'dirty baby' young nigga, wit young figures but on rapverse you must be rich cuz u post twice every minute like what you are, a no life bitch w/e if its weak...i gotta go to a meeting in 10min...dont get it, dont vote |
no matter where you go...i'ma be there Poppin up like a neandraphall
stick glue on ''tha mittens'' 'cause ya 'Black citys' dropppin the ball Homey, you only standin tall next to me if you attatched too stilts only time its ''off the dome'' wit you is rockin a hat witta' Tilt PEOPLES rookie? brown nosin the rock still wont have your shit smelt you could be in touchin distance witta blind man .............................................an you're presence ain't felt cards are dealt, man its elementary, an you're losin First Hand you'd think a terrorist is controllin ya punches...cuz the shits dont land You couldnt bring the beef hard if it was supersizzed or even enlarged shit....if rv says.. beatin on herbs is a crime, then with this rhyme, im guily as Charged! explanation- in his user profile it says ''from: tha mittens''....the rest you should understand..... |
lmfao........iight, iight.....nice................uppin
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Voted For: Black City
GOOD: Flow - tie Structure - tie Punchlines - tie vocab - tie Wordplay - Verbal Shoota Nameplay - Verebal Shoota BAD: forced Rhymes - Verbal Shoota Forced Multis - no Non Sence - nope CREATIVITY Theme Battle - no Creative Punches - Black city creative multi's - nope PERSONALS: Both had great personals this was almost a tied battle but Black City had em more hard hittin... OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: Black City Closing: Tie COMMENT: The battle was (like I said) almost a tie, but wut happened here wuz that Black city had a few better punches and Verbal Shoota forced sum rhymes... pc V/ Black City |
Voted For: Verbal Shoota
dude its not cool to ga and do tha type of shit dat you do you must have a 'disese', 'RAW' is tha fuckin name of ya crew! wack opener Tephlon? please dont tell me dats a name ya niggaz gave you cuz ya flow aint strong, i dont have to shoot, i can easily punch thru no i heard dat you was a bitch and when you lose you be gettin niggaz dq'd what type of shit is dat? what a pussy, now tha RV know its true okay, punch was a little-aight but whateva, nigga imma win dis one here, you gettin mad? maybe but before dat happen 'clean ya act up' cuz like ya location you a 'dirty baby' nope young nigga, wit young figures but on rapverse you must be rich cuz u post twice every minute like what you are, a no life bitch weak closer no matter where you go...i'ma be there Poppin up like a neandraphall stick glue on ''tha mittens'' 'cause ya 'Black citys' dropppin the ball weak opener Homey, you only standin tall next to me if you attatched too stilts only time its ''off the dome'' wit you is rockin a hat witta' Tilt decent PEOPLES rookie? brown nosin the rock still wont have your shit smelt you could be in touchin distance witta blind man .............................................an you're presence ain't felt meh, flow is lackin here.. punch was aight cards are dealt, man its elementary, an you're losin First Hand you'd think a terrorist is controllin ya punches...cuz the shits dont land nope You couldnt bring the beef hard if it was supersizzed or even enlarged shit....if rv says.. beatin on herbs is a crime, then with this rhyme, im guily as Charged! decent closer overall Teph took this one.. punches were just harder than blackness here.. black work on ur punches.. add some personas & shit .. n’ make them connect.. cuz ur rhymes were connecting at all in this battle.. no hate.. just elevate |
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota
v/verbal shoota... reasoning:..he kept it consistent...thru out....a punch in everybar....that last one was cheesy, though....black, ya flow was kew...yu didnt have any hard hittin punches, though.....and one of the bars...wasnt even a punch....the thrd one....I wasnt feelin ya verse..at all...good try though...... pm me if i gotta break it down more..... |
Voted For: Black City
open: Black City close: Black City personals: Black city metas: Both punches: Both multis: None win:Black City |
Voted For: Verbal Shoota
This kat owned dat City dude.... wdf is up wit mockin RAW bro????? fuk you.... black city dnt eva mock raw..... cuz dat my crew tooo not on r.v. i got my own crew called RAW_SKILL ENT....we make musick.... fuk ya dnt eva mock dat,,,, any ways this vote goes ta Verbal Shoota..... overall why?? ask yourself... better vocab.. better punches by fukin miles flow owned him..... lines a bit too strecthed.... but otherwise dope best lines were no matter where you go...i'ma be there Poppin up like a neandraphall stick glue on ''tha mittens'' 'cause ya 'Black citys' dropppin the ball Homey, you only standin tall next to me if you attatched too stilts ^^^^^^ lmfao good werd play.... wit da droppin the ball now fo black city??? well dude its not cool to ga and do tha type of shit dat you do you must have a 'disese', 'RAW' is tha fuckin name of ya crew! ^^^^^ only da opener...... dat wuz da only good thang..u had better overall flow than Verbal shoota but lacked puncehs.. Overall vote goes to verbal shoota.... return the favour //..... u peeps.... an honest vote.... peace!!!! |
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