Three New Beats
 

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"Trouble" - A fun little beat with a mandolin melody, hard kicks tight bass.
"Depression"- Emotional beat, heavy strings, heavy bass, and a harpish melody. Bells sound kinda fucked up at the hook though.
"The Deep End"- Kinda tough explaining this one...sorda a club banger, I guess...Hard kicks, rockish hook.

Feedback please! :thumbup:

trouble= fucking annoying...take that bass or wateva or do something else with it cuz its annoying...the chorus gets worst...the melodi is iighht...nice drums tho

depression= mmm better than trouble...teres missing something...like better kicks or hithats ...dont put claps on that..put snares...make the tempo i lil bit faster cuz thats too fast...well its my opinion...take that thing off the chorus please...its anoying

The Deep End= better than the others...but i cant see someone rip that beat...nice snare i like them...the melodie is iight...make something more simple cuz it sounds like its the chorus all the way...the electric guitar is annoyin again...no hate

overall if u continu makin beats ull be dope...ur creative so holla at me when ull get more beats done

Deep End - Just looped over and over...got old after awhile, plus I heard a short pause where it souded like you looped it

Depression - kind of dry, missing something it seems, and I can hear a short pause where you loop over, need to work on mixing

Trouble - Annoying really....once again work on ya mixing a little....


you got skills, just keep practicing

they were all very annoin cuz u first started out wit an aight beat then u changed it to a diff. tempo diff. style man and kept on changin them almost everybeat but the only one that was good i think it was trouble the last one there that u had that kept a maintainin beat in the beginin and then added more styles inot them so keep that up aight man just an hones opinion aight man but keep doin ya thing

ya songs are aiight. i feel like all of em need either some more banging drums or a more banging melody. it's always like one is missing. build a great percussion loop then add a melody that's just as tight. it's almost like you get tired and just throw the drums/melody on top. and cut the intros down a little if they're not going anywhere. it felt like "the deep end" intro was really gonna go somewhere but it didn't. same with "depression". trouble was kinda tight. keep it up