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Pen N' Paper vs K-Trini
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No feeding 6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 06-26-05 at 05:38 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 05:38 PM.
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Why ya give so much time?
Post ur verse now man.....I'ma post mine now.I I'm just impatient when it somes to battles. |
Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 05:41 PM.
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K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity U rappin is like “Mic-heal Jordan” makin errors being a baseball player The way u win battles is by swaying and realize in fact that ur a failure Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this K-Trini man ur a mini bitch wit a gurl name ur punches are not gon be hittin Ur other verses ive seen “stink like shit” whats the difference ur verse is shittin So K just face it u gay and theres no way for u to win this battle no prospect Even in GFX, Topical, Audio and this in Text ill murk u cuz u just a speck… |
Pen&Paper So obssesed on stayin behind ,you'd ~write-it-late~
And you don't like the pen's function.....you just ~like-it's-shape~ It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~ And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~ You would neva get close to stars like a review on a bad movie Pen can follow ethics made by kin,but ya verse still won't move me Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~ Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~ 1st bar Think about the shape of a pen and wat else is like dat :evilgrin: 2nd bar u should know 3rd. bar kinethic-movement kin-relatives ethic-a set a rules 4th. bar you should know |
sry for takin so long....had to do sumtin
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This was feedback posted for K-Trini
1st bar
Think about the shape of a pen and wat else is like dat 2nd bar u should know 3rd. bar kinethic-movement kin-relatives ethic-a set a rules 4th. bar you should know ^ i think you're tryin to say kinetic.... lol... and a pens shape?? what are u sayin like a penis? cuz a pen dont look like a penis to me... |
Voted For: K-Trini
K-Trini - iight spit, the flow was pretty good, and you had some iight punches in there. Best Line - It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~ And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~ Worst Line - Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~ Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~ Pen N' Paper - Your spit was decent, flowed well, some punches were pointless, but others good. Best Line - K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity Worst Line - Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this OVERALL - This battle was a close one, but I am givin' my vote to K-Trini. I liked his punches better, and it flowed well, with good multi's. Pen some of your punches were straight whack, you should have used solid ones threw out the whole verse. Vote - K-Trini |
thx for the vote Gkillaz................uppin
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uppin this aight gkilla thnx for votin' uppin this
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uppin this man votes plz pplz vote on this cmon....
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