Black City vs Predator
 

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Predator has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 11:08 PM.

Black City has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 11:09 PM.

Where I'm from we beat niggas freestylin or written/B.City a lame, how he spittin',where the fuck is "Tha Mitten"?/

I've read this niggas battles, and I say he lost in some/
cause Black City's flow is shaky like he got Parkison's'/

Black City actin like he won't get hit by tha Uzi or tha Tech/
B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet/

Black City represent the GB Boiz/
I wiped my ass wit em', now we should call'em the TP boiz

EASY



4 tha ones that don't get it:
TP stands for toilet paper and you wipe yo ass wit toilet paper

He said he was from the Mitten in his profile

dis wack nigga want to battle, i guess my only question is why
cuz his flow is worst than a 'sung verse' from a nigga like 'T.I.'

i hate to spit like dis, rippin pred up and ruinin his whole career
but greatness in ya future is like ya bitch hair, homie it aint there

my shit is crushin you, so take whateva you wrote down to say and trash it
cuz dis one is 'one-sided' like tha 'cassidy and freeway battle classic'

its a wrap bitch, in eight lines four bars i ate yo cookie ass up
and please stop rappin cuz we lil 'eminems', we 'dont give a fuck'

dun...jus sum quick shit...votes please...and if it seem to "basic" for yall, it only mean dat i dont take time to prewrite every fuckin battle like most of yall...so if you dont get it, dont fuckin vote at all, dig?...'its Black bitch!'

Voted For: Black City


dis wack nigga want to battle, i guess my only question is why
cuz his flow is worst than a 'sung verse' from a nigga like 'T.I.'
^^whack
i hate to spit like dis, rippin pred up and ruinin his whole career
but greatness in ya future is like ya bitch hair, homie it aint there
^^whack....got alink to something that proves he got a bald girl
my shit is crushin you, so take whateva you wrote down to say and trash it
cuz dis one is 'one-sided' like tha 'cassidy and freeway battle classic'
^^^OK
its a wrap bitch, in eight lines four bars i ate yo cookie ass up
and please stop rappin cuz we lil 'eminems', we 'dont give a fuck'
^^whack

3 whack punches one decent.Just decent.....not all dat hot.Flow was mediocre.Creativity suked.U need to put wordplay and metas.Add complexity and creativity.

Where I'm from we beat niggas freestylin or written/B.City a lame, how he spittin',where the fuck is "Tha Mitten"?/
^^whack....
I've read this niggas battles, and I say he lost in some/
cause Black City's flow is shaky like he got Parkison's'/
^^^well...um....ight....
Black City actin like he won't get hit by tha Uzi or tha Tech/
B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet/
^^whack
Black City represent the GB Boiz/
^^gon finish that bar?

Ight first....structure ur bar off better.lOok at how Black City dropped his shit.Urs was mad ugly.U had not one decent punchlines.Like BC....ya need wordplay and metas.And stop stretchin ur lines....kills out the flow

Vote-Black City(Please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

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Voted For: Predator

this was a pretty good battle ya know....kind of one sided but it had me entertained


Black-dis wack nigga want to battle, i guess my only question is why
cuz his flow is worst than a 'sung verse' from a nigga like 'T.I.'
this was ok...opener could have been better
i hate to spit like dis, rippin pred up and ruinin his whole career
but greatness in ya future is like ya bitch hair, homie it aint there
haha...LMAO
my shit is crushin you, so take whateva you wrote down to say and trash it
cuz dis one is 'one-sided' like tha 'cassidy and freeway battle classic'
this was ok...didn't really hit though
its a wrap bitch, in eight lines four bars i ate yo cookie ass up
and please stop rappin cuz we lil 'eminems', we 'dont give a fuck'
this is a no no
dun...jus sum quick shit...votes please...and if it seem to "basic" for yall, it only mean dat i dont take time to prewrite every fuckin battle like most of yall...so if you dont get it, dont fuckin vote at all, dig?...'its Black bitch!'
seem like you a lil angry...for a song this would be ok...but for a battle this wasn't good.

Breakdown-this verse was mediocre...could have been better wit the vocab and punches...a lil more personal would have been nice too Verse- 4.5/10




Predator-Where I'm from we beat niggas freestylin or written/B.City a lame, how he spittin',where the fuck is "Tha Mitten"?/--this was ok...could have been worded betta to make it sound clean

I've read this niggas battles, and I say he lost in some/
cause Black City's flow is shaky like he got Parkison's'/
nice...heard it befo
Black City actin like he won't get hit by tha Uzi or tha Tech/
B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet/
this was really nice punch
Black City represent the GB Boiz/
I wiped my ass wit em', now we should call'em the TP boiz
haha...nice closer


Breakdown-this was was above par...nice battle verse...if you add a lil more complexity it would be real nice..Verse 7/10



VOTE-Predator

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Voted For: Predator

Black City actin like he won't get hit by tha Uzi or tha Tech/
B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet/

that won it

black city had no punches in this one

Voted For: Predator

man this was a very very equal battle i say that everything was like a tie. structure was aight by the both of you.what stands out about predators rhyme was his one line:

Black City actin like he won't get hit by tha Uzi or tha Tech/
B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet/

both of u were pretty solid man nice close battle
please drop an HONEST vote at my battle with slik flo please

cmon yall...i fucked him up...but its iight, at least yall votin.....uppin for more votes like these

Voted For: Predator

ok battle,
pred took this battle, because he had alot stronger punch lines and he had flow. the wordplay and vocab was basicaly even though. the content was also kinda shallow on both sides, really not much to say about this battle after that.
BC, i got your verse, but it was kinda basic. no hating, but you should atleast put more time and thought into it before you just put it down cause you are competing.
much respect to both.

Voted For: Predator

predator u got my vote for better punches . . . but it all truthfullness it drop was kinda weak nohting really impressed me but u drop it better than Black City
'cause Black City's flow is shaky like he got Parkison's'" and "B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet' those were great lines and i'm not taken from ur drop just sayin it could be better . . .but good drop anyway i think u took it from City