Wall Street vs K-Trini
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
K-Trini Can't Be DQ'ed For Having More Then Five Battles Open

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 06-24-05 at 02:11 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Wall Street has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 01:44 AM.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 01:55 AM.

Wall Street won't spit smooth and hard if they~sold-boulders~
U could set ya arms on fire,but you'd still get the~cold-shoulder~
You could be a stripper,but nodody'd even toss you a coin
Nobody'd go on one knee for you,if you cracked their joints
I'll merk u,spittin 1 line,1 time,while you~go-twenty-times~
Got da cleanest tape cause it been brushed off~so-many-times~

Explainin some
1st bar
boulder is a rock smooth and hard
cold shoulder is a term that means fuck off
2nd bar
Goin on one knee means to propose marriage,and a joint connects the knee
3rd bar
brushed offf is a term for rejection

If ya need help wit anything else.....PM me :thumbup:

my bad for the blackness......din't know it'd look like dat....just highlight it.

my goodness wall street................how did you get 3-0????That verse was weak.

watever.............expect a record of 3-1

Voted For: Wall Street

easy easy win for wall street

k-trini,,, you rhymed times with times... not impressive at all..your vocab was eh but you need to get rid of the ~ things they are very noobish.. your flow was choppy the whole way through ... and your punches werent very strong
I'll merk u,spittin 1 line,1 time,while you~go-twenty-times~
Got da cleanest tape cause it been brushed off~so-many-times~
that was blah.... thats what lost the battle for ya it was weak

wallstreet nice drop over all nothing to special but your rhyme scheme was much better and you had a overall better verse... your stuff was orginal which is always good... no need for the opener and closer thing.. and try to match your lines more

overall cuz of a better word choice and for not rhyming times with times and not having weaker punches

my honest vote goes to wallstreet

for one fuckin line....you vote against me????????

Voted For: Wall Street

K-Trini

Wall Street won't spit smooth and hard if they~sold-boulders~
U could set ya arms on fire,but you'd still get the~cold-shoulder~
ok
You could be a stripper,but nodody'd even toss you a coin
Nobody'd go on one knee for you,if you cracked their joints
not good
I'll merk u,spittin 1 line,1 time,while you~go-twenty-times~
Got da cleanest tape cause it been brushed off~so-many-times~
meh

Ok look, stop with all the "~~~", and the explenations aren't needed, also you came with a forced ryhme scheme dude and try to spell properly man, none of that "da" shit, but overall I saw 2 "meh" bars. Nothing really stood out.

Wall Strizzle:
Yep, It True You Getting Called Out Ppl Just Want Easy Wins
But You Wouldn't Stick To This Board, If Your Punches Were Pins
not bad but played concept
Listen Dawg... You Get Shit On Like A Toilet Kid
Only Heat You Drop Is Gaz...Ass Spoiled & Shit
ok
Aluminum Barracks..Shit I'll Still Foil This Trick
He's Not Spitting Smooth........With Oil On His Lip
ok

You had a better verse but try coming more complex, you weren't as forced though, however you dont need to have a "opener" and "closer" and stop with all the capitols infront of every letter and having your verse bold, it's wack, other then that, you took this one.

v// Wall Streat for a more solid verse

Voted For: Wall Street

this wasnt that great of a battle

Wall Street - i felt that ur punches were creative..but didnt really connect like u wanted them to..ur opener was ok..ur closer wasnt really that great..but u had a good flow.....7/10




K-Trini - u are getting better..i liked ur opener..it was pretty cool..but other than that..u basically went downhill from there..a few of ur lines seemed streched so that took away from ur verse..only had 1 punch.....6/10



close one but Wall Street wins