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.Split Personality.
Artik Phrost[text name] <<vs>> Sixpionts[stage name]
PRE-GAME: Sixpionts:......I can't believe this shit!...I been lurking here since before she knew what a damn treble clef was!...I'm the one who breathed style into her music...Why this bitch get all the credit?...Who The FUCK is Artik Phrost?!...That lame ass Text Artist is going down!... Artik Phrost: ....Let Us Begin.... . . . ...Announcer... Ladies And Gentlemen....Tonight, For The Title Of "Official Owner Of HER," You Will Witness The Inner Battle Of Two Forces, So iLL.....You May Need To Wear Lab Goggles To Read This......(Pause For Audience Preparation) *On The Right Side.....In The Italics Style....With 39 Wins and 12 losses,We Have Artik Phrost!!... *On The Left Side.....In Regular Style....We Have The Defending, "Self Claimed," Champion, Sixpionts!!.... ...... "Ok Ok...Ya'll Know The Rules...Lets Make This A Good, Clean Fight....Artik Phrost Won The Toss Up And She Has Decided To Go First....Touch Ya -Key Pad To Mic-" ......... !!LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!! Rd 1. Artik Phrost [Wise] ....Its A Simple Matter Of Brains Over Brawns, The Taming of Ponds Stitched Scriptures In My Palms, Wove Her Style, This Dame Is My Spawn! ....'Raise Ya Arm' To Speak, Chick!...Artik Got The 'Upper Hand' In This My Melodies Pose A Threat To Ya Lyke Photagraphin A Band Of Terrorists! Sixpionts [Demonic] ....Yo, Fuck Ya Reasoning And Logics!..Bitch, I Control The cockpit!!.. While You Givin Poetic Justice, I'm Grippin Clips, Making Tummies Flip Lyke They Nausious!!.. ....You Sick Wit The Metaphors!..But Really, Have You Met A Four?!!..(4-4..gun) I Helped Snap The Metal Form To Ya Foe's Head!..I SHOWED YOU What Barrets-Uh For!!..(baretta) Rd 2. Artik Phrost ....Honestly, Sixpionts, Who Shed The Light On Your Horizonz? Wen You Were Stranded On Writer's Block, Who's Style Were You Tryna Ryde With? ....My Text Opened Your Life And Made HER A Genious On The Mic Im The Way! It Seems Lyke, So Even SHE's Gettin' Ready To Sign Over The Rights! Sixpionts ....Ya Spit Nonsense!..How You Get All The Glory In This Textin Line Shit?!!.. I EGG ON Her Violent Behavior They Love In Content Lyke The Bad Side of The Conscience!!.. ....I Don't Believe You'll Get Far!..Cause Nobody Lykes Your Stretched Bars!!.. And Personally, If I Had To Take In Anything Thrown From Ya Lungs, I'd Rather Catch SARS!!.. Rd 3.Artik Phrost ....My Platform, Lucky You've Lived Thus Far! Now You Need To Feel This I 'Poured My Talent Down Ya Thoat'!..YES! I AM Ya 'Passageway To Ya iLLness'! ....But, We've Known That From Beginnin'...So Just Admit That You Loss Before Artik Has To Leave 'Points In A Box'...Lyke Writing Complaints To Ya Boss! Sixpionts ....Its Been Me Here From The Start!..Where The FUCK Did You Erect From?!!.. Ya Think Just Because Ya Tore A Few Herbs Apart..You Got The Right To Call Yaself A Vet, Hun?!!.. ....FUCK THAT!..I'm The One Who Drew Ya Trends..Ur Nothin New To Them!!.. If There Is Difference Its That I AM HER!..BITCH, And You'll Forever Remain A Fucken Psuedonym!!.. -After Three Rounds....Both Of The Forces Have Thrown In The Towel!!- !!-D.R.A.W.-!! COMMENTS: Artik Phrost: ....Knowledge Shall Prevail Sooner or Later....I Have Patience.... Sixpionts: .....Fuck Artik's knowledge!...I've been here longer...Wisdom rises above ALL...I'm tired of battling this bitch. Wheres my towel?...I'm going to my locker room...... *This Has Been Brought To You By PTD Productions 2004 |
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DAMN diz wuz a nyce ass peice yo
My fave lines ....'Raise Ya Arm' To Speak, Chick!...Artik Got The 'Upper Hand' In This My Melodies Pose A Threat To Ya Lyke Photagraphin A Band Of Terrorists! Sixpionts [Demonic] ....Yo, Fuck Ya Reasoning And Logics!..Bitch, I Control The cockpit!!.. While You Givin Poetic Justice, I'm Grippin Clips, Making Tummies Flip Lyke They Nausious!!.. They wuz hot yo....nyce peice, creative stuff gurl...u shuld scream at ya boy 4 a collab sometime for real huh.. |
This was good but the way the font size and all that put me off......however its a really good peice cos its original and not many people dun tried this...good job in tryin this but it was hard to follow and shit but ok shit......6.5/10
----------- edit...didnt read round 2...thats was hot that was hot.....now im feelin it lol....8/10.....i missed half of this....gd shit... |
Real unique and i was feelin the style of a boxin match type thing.
Dope vocab throughout decent flow nice punches. My OM of the month up to know. |
yo Artik Phrost this piece was dope, the unique style of settin out ur om was crazy, i liked the whole sorta round scheme, you had some sick barz, flowed well, almost like a story the way it kept bouncin from one to the other... nice work ma... uppin for this yo....
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this was anice drop, sumthin new n refreshing but that METAPHOR/MET A FOUR line im sure i heard from STLYES P. but overall good shit keep it up 7/10 ~1ne~
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thankz yall'....ill hit ya'll stuff up
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shit was fire ma! wordness
how is that open mic collabo coming along?? |
yeah liked this a lot........real original.........jus drop the front size a lil though
but part from that.it was a 8/10 |
Your marking her down for the size of the font :noob:
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^lol....its iight, daubs.....ya know me...im stubborn as hell....so i personally dont care...just tell me im 'THECOMPLETEANDABSOLUTESHIT'.....lol, naw..j/p
but, criminal...im waitin on young's verse....he got a lil more tyme...then imma just post it up with me on yur verse |
cool ma!!
and this was fire, i might make one like this where i battle my-self but a little different same concept but since i had a name change its gonna be a little different holla at me ma!! |
Damn, you pretty good with the metas and vocab.
I give this a 9/10 |
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