J.Terror vs chaotic.
 

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Check in by: 06-24-05 at 04:35 PM

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J.Terror has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 04:09 PM.

chaotic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 04:10 PM.

yo this emcee will never be on my level cause he has a curse
J.Terror? you got scared cuase you took a look at my verse
im leaving you juggling your words and dead with a group of herbs
i'll kill you thats using an action like i was using nouns and verbs
you wanna rap to get fame but to bad your raps are fuckin lame*
your ass is better at just quiting and going back to playing a game*
j.terror you can now predict a lose on your record just quit you oughta
you fake bitch probally can't tap a bitches ass like your ass can't tap wata
so i won this shit was easy its like facing a ghost j.terror the who?
lets just put this in words you can understand it goes me than you.


*= his sig has san andreas....the game for ps2

upin for votes pll.....................................come'on

this site is mo'ass than J-Lo
uppin for a vote or some-fucking-thing yo

wha the fuck a nigga gotta do to get a fucking vote.....
upppppppppin........

Yes it's me again......chaotic up this shit for us please...fucker
If you worn't....then i guess I'm Uppppppppppppppppppppin
don't be dodging the loss bra...

Voted For: J.Terror

yo this emcee will never be on my level cause he has a curse
J.Terror? you got scared cuase you took a look at my verse
okay
im leaving you juggling your words and dead with a group of herbs
i'll kill you thats using an action like i was using nouns and verbs
nah
you wanna rap to get fame but to bad your raps are fuckin lame*
your ass is better at just quiting and going back to playing a game*
decent punch
j.terror you can now predict a lose on your record just quit you oughta
you fake bitch probally can't tap a bitches ass like your ass can't tap wata
nah
so i won this shit was easy its like facing a ghost j.terror the who?
lets just put this in words you can understand it goes me than you.
nah


I'll cough and pour gas on ya skin, watch ya bitch rhymes collapse
U cud lace knuckles with campin untensils,& i'd still not meet my match
decent opener
You couldn't be legendary-if you took Ali's hooks & throw'd them back
Ripping this jack,can't come "Near" a win, cause you'll always get sacked
nah
I could toss my lungs at you, and you still couldn't manage a win
Your playing tug of war witha dick, it's inevitable that'll i cum harder than him
okay, this punch was aight
I'm exposing this roach for what he is,like public food inspectors,
Quit fronting,we know you never held steel-whole lifes a metal detector
weak
Punches cause friction like witchez wearin no undies on broom stickz
Dude couldn't"plant herbs in the garden",if he was a "Knicks" draft pick
okay

chaotic – punches were okay, could’ve made them harder than that
..structure was decent, but the flow was sort of lackin here.. add
more personas than that though, & make those punches harder

terror – punches were aight here, you came harder than chaotic
w/ the punches here, structure was decent & the flow was aight..
..add some personals against your opponent to make ur battles
more.. interesting to read on what you made fun of ur opponent
..but overall keep working on ur punches also..

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp for some votes....

Voted For: chaotic.

yo this emcee will never be on my level cause he has a curse
J.Terror? you got scared cuase you took a look at my verse
^^^self glorified...so nope
im leaving you juggling your words and dead with a group of herbs
i'll kill you thats using an action like i was using nouns and verbs
^^flowed good,but not really a punch
you wanna rap to get fame but to bad your raps are fuckin lame*
your ass is better at just quiting and going back to playing a game*
^^sry...not feelin this
j.terror you can now predict a lose on your record just quit you oughta
you fake bitch probally can't tap a bitches ass like your ass can't tap wata
^^^nah....whack
so i won this shit was easy its like facing a ghost j.terror the who?
lets just put this in words you can understand it goes me than you.
^^^nah....

Ight look.....ur had a personal in there but it was weak.U need wordplays and metas in ur shit.Can't just state a bunch a bullshit.Ans stop with self glorifing.

I'll cough and pour gas on ya skin, watch ya bitch rhymes collapse
U cud lace knuckles with campin untensils,& i'd still not meet my match
^^self glorifing....
You couldn't be legendary-if you took Ali's hooks & throw'd them back
Ripping this jack,can't come "Near" a win, cause you'll always get sacked
^^nah...ain't feelin this one
I could toss my lungs at you, and you still couldn't manage a win
Your playing tug of war witha dick, it's inevitable that'll i cum harder than him
^^omg...this was the worst line u eva made
I'm exposing this roach for what he is,like public food inspectors,
Quit fronting,we know you never held steel-whole lifes a metal detector
^^OK
Punches cause friction like witchez wearin no undies on broom stickz
Dude couldn't"plant herbs in the garden",if he was a "Knicks" draft pick
^^OK
This was the weakest verse I seen u make.U self glorified at the beggining.Try to stop that shit.And add some personals in ur shit.U need more wordplay and metas.But you had a couple decent punches at end.

Vote-J.Terror(vote in link below or vote removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589


Switched

ooh shit...I'll report it to get the vote switched.

^^^lol okay..cause i was wondering how that happened
and i'll return the favour bra....a.s.a.p thanx for peeping this tho

vote in the link J...................................