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Wall Street vs LyricleSolja
Battle Rules: 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Weeerdness Good Luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 350 Check in by: 06-25-05 at 10:40 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-25-05 10:10 PM.
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Wall Street has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-25-05 10:11 PM.
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Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig? Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry' You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV* * Post As In When A Soldier Is Poster, Line As In Lines Of Army Or TO Serve On The Line |
*Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart,
his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart", . **On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear, Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear, . ***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed", we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead, . ****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan, and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn, . *****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth, I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth. . . *-i was goin off his name wall street, wall-Mart **-its the truth ***-again the truth ****-Think about it *****-i was his first friend on RV and he alwase asked me for advise.... . . wall ur probly goina win but i just needed to say those things-- |
Lol Aiight Dude, Bumping This Shit's To The TOp You Know This
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Voted For: Wall Street
Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart, his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart", .^^are you serious? **On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear, Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear, .^^^OK ***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed", we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead, .^^^OK ****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan, and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn, .^^weak *****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth, I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth. ^^^wat u talkin bout....that ain't a punch Yo...ur shit lacked in punches.Ur structure wasn't that good.That last bar could have been a hard hittin punch if you used it better.U just stated shit in ur verse.Where are your wordplay ans metas? Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig? Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig ^^ight....but kinda a self glorifing bar Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly ^^^LO...Nice A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up ^^nah...I dun like this one And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry' ^^^OK.....a lil basic though You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV* ^^NICE Well....ur verse was a lil repitive as you constantly went after his name.At times...you were a lil too basic.Ur flow was ight.U structured ur verse nicely.Just next time try not to be so basic.But ya still gettin the win here. Vote-Wall Street(please vote in link below or this vote will be removed) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589 |
Aiight Thanks Man......................................
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Voted For: Wall Street
*Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart, his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart", decent **On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear, Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear, weak ***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed", we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead, okay ****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan, and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn, nah[/n] *****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth, I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth. [n]close was okay Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig? Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig coo opener Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly okay A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up weak And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry' decent You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV* decent closer overall.. solja u could’ve came better than that, cuz those punches weren’t really connecting at all, elevate more, yo wall ur drop was coo, punches were aight in this battle.. ..structure was okay, but add some personas against ur opponents, aight? No hate.. Pz |
Thanks My Nigga.......................................
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Voted For: Wall Street
Ok this was a decent battle, but i think that wall street had this one. WS's stucture and flow was a lot more readable and the punches hit a whole lot harde. there were good personals in WS verse. voc was better as well cos even though LSs verse was ok the vocab was real elementary and the flow was far too basic. LSs attempted personals just didn't hit hard enough. LS could've swung the battle his way if only he'd come with better flow, and used a more comlex rhyme structure. But this didn't happen so wall street gets this one |
sall good...no hate i knew you would win lol......keep killin em ST...
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Lol! Weeerdness Man.....................
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Voted For: Wall Street
iight as i see it Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig? Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig 8/10 good personal/punch Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly 7/10 good personal A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up 7/10 good punchline And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry' 6/10 good punch played concept but different wording You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV* 7/10 good pucnhes 35/50 *Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart, his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart", 5/10 Wack wording on his name **On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear, Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear, 6/10 good personal but i think it woulda sound betta on audio ***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed", we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead, 3/10 ehh wack ok personal ****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan, and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn 3/10 Gay attemp to a pun *****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth, I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth. 5/10 iight vote/wall street betta verse overall and solja loose the stars |
Voted For: Wall Street
Total Breakdown Wall Street Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig? Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig Nice Small Personal LOL Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly LOL :roll: I Jus Notice that shit too LOL Damn Nice A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up LOl Im fuckin bout to piss in my pants over here that one was tight man And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry' Not all Dat But It was good Wordplay :thumbup: You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV* :shocked: Good Wordplay ...Nice Wordplay...Dope Wordplay Overall man You Got this battle man Im Still Laughin at the disses man There really on point each line was Directed towards your oppenent and that what I Like to see no self-glorification All disses Shits dope Man NICE LS *Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart, his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart", ...Aii.... **On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear, Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear, ......Not Good .... ***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed", we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead, ...No Punch No Diss ...This was weak ****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan, and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn, ...Weak... *****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth, I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth. ...:huh: Man That was weak... Overall i Think You need to elavte on DIRECT PUNCHEZ not jus regular disses it sound like you jus fussing and ryming with it man Your stuff was weak and that why I couldnt give you my vot ein this batte v/ Wall Street |
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