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06-26-05 07:07 PM |
ok im listenin..
chorus right off the back is alil simple..and make it sound louder wit some adlibs...ok you spittin now..not bad..ya flow is on point..lyrics pretty good..but quality is alil ass be..if you can clear it up a bit more and raise the vocals on the over all track it shoulld sound better....iight secnod guy..came it nice wit it...iight thats wassup buddy mashin up his flow...some funny lyrics...aww..he fallin off a bit though but comes back...ends it well nice stuff kid...umm i guess theres someone else....yeah there goes the 3rd cat...but really sounds mad simple some short ass rhymes..should of made ya lines longer...and ya lyrics sound maddd easy kid i was predictin ya next line..just practice at the mic a bit more cuz it dont sound like you been spittin long ...well i'll give this a 7.5/10 if the quality can improve and just fix some shits here and there this can be a good track...1ne..
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