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B.I.G. 06-26-05 01:36 AM

Don't Come Back
 
(Intro)
man... this bitch is anoying me..... I ain't gon give you mo money... please get outta here...

(Bridge)
Like Eminem says "bitches, they come they go"
This bitch keeps comin back for more do'
I guess I will never leave this Ho
Cuz the bitch will always come back fo' mo'

(Hook)
"I want money" Nope
"I Want Drugs" Nope
"I'll Kill Myself" I Hope
"I Want A Ride" Nope
Get Out bitch... and Don't Come Back
Girl you bouta give me a heart attack
Leave now Girl... and Don't come back
don't make me use this ma' fuckin gat

(Verse 1)
It was a good night under the city's light
Wuz feelin full of might, a nice gurl at sight
She came to me like we can do this tonight
but I wasn't right, I should had left her on the green light
but she had them hips swingin like DAMN!!!!
This gurl tonight sho' needs a MAN
she was kinda gracious, I couldn't fight temptations
we were sho goin to make sum creations
We had nice time in Bed, I've never seen an "ass Like That"
but a couple days later I wuz feelin like "pass that gat"
cuz she wuz usin all my money for her clothes
I warn ya'll never trust this kinda hoes

(Hook)
"I want money" Nope
"I Want Drugs" Nope
"I'll Kill Myself" I Hope
"I Want A Ride" Nope
Get Out bitch... and Don't Come Back
Girl you bouta give me a heart attack
Leave now Girl... and Don't come back
don't make me use this ma' fuckin gat

(Verse 2)
She brought me a problem every day of the week
But I liked spankin that beautifull ass cheek
She spent my money on pure non-sence shit
But I loved when she put her mouth right on my dick
The day came "meet-the-parents" I wuz like please no
I had to "Live-with-titans" C'mon bitch lets go....
Her mother was ugly, Even Her dad called her pig
I only liked "doggy", but to find my shoe "start to dig"*
Comin back home I told her "this won't happen"
"I have to go n start my career in rappin"
she cried for a week and I tryed to chill her
The next week I was just about ta kill her
I ended up in court, for attempt of murder
She looked at me like "You nigga crossed the border"
That bitch won't leave me alone, she was "head strong"
I guess now that I was wrong... come on ya'll sing along

(Bridge)
Like Eminem says "bitches, they come they go"
This bitch keeps comin back for more do'
I guess I will never leave this Ho
Cuz the bitch will always come back fo' mo'

(Hook)
"I want money" Nope
"I Want Drugs" Nope
"I'll Kill Myself" I Hope
"I Want A Ride" Nope
Get Out bitch... and Don't Come Back
Girl you bouta give me a heart attack
Leave now Girl... and Don't come back
don't make me use this ma' fuckin gat

(Outro)
**Judge Talkin** the defender is..... Inocent!!!
**a lot of people talkin**
**me talkin** Sorry bitch... you lost again
**the bitch looks at me and leaves the court**

hahahahaha..... and Don't come back

**door closes**

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*doggy was the name of the dog and he burried my shoe

Macca 06-26-05 04:39 AM

it was good but could use some work. thats all....

B.I.G. 06-26-05 01:51 PM

thanxx.................... uppin..........................

B.I.G. 06-26-05 09:10 PM

........................uppin..................... .....................

Illumatic 06-26-05 09:17 PM

i will not read this...

pm me a copy with no hooks.... thx

B.I.G. 06-27-05 12:06 AM

wtf?........... aight whateva......... LOL

................uppin this shit............................

B.I.G. 06-27-05 02:47 PM

uppin............................................. ...
feedback plz

¤ÐÅž¤ 06-27-05 03:21 PM

this was a wack concept from beginning to end
.
be more original n not mainstream with ya om's
dont mention eminem in ya shit n think it'll
make people like what they read.....
you need alot of elevation .. find ya style cuz as of
right now it just looks like gibberish that ryhmes...
no hate man, just being real...i wouldve never posted trash like this
you need to up your standards of whats good n whats bad in ya
opinion....seriously....go back to the drawing board n research
what dope heads drop on this board n on others.....


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