§ick§eed vs .:~YoungE~:.
 

Battle Rules:

6-8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feedin
No Bullshit votes

yeh good luck dunny

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-26-05 at 10:27 PM

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§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-26-05 10:07 PM.

.:~YoungE~:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-26-05 10:11 PM.

This Kid Is Hard To Beat? Nah I Seen Ya Battle Herb Just Go To Bed And Admit Defeat
Lines Don't Matter, Punches? Wearing Gloves By Heaters Is The Only Way They Pack Heat
Your Talent Dispersed, Four Winz Missing In Action Just Like Ya Barz Can’t Be A Verse,
Here Is A New Disease It A Ko Your Been Infected Someone Pleez Get Sick Seed A Nurse.
Up Ya Skillz Ya Verse Lack Creativity Your One In Need What A Name This Guys Diseased
Nah I Seen Ya Battle Im Suprized U Got For Winz Cause Ya Lines Are Ones To Succeed.

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Voted For: §ick§eed

This Kid Is Hard To Beat? Nah I Seen Ya Battle Herb Just Go To Bed And Admit Defeat
Lines Don't Matter, Punches? Wearing Gloves By Heaters Is The Only Way They Pack Heat
^^^Ight...a bit long,not flow,but content,shorten it &it would hit harder
Your Talent Dispersed, Four Winz Missing In Action Just Like Ya Barz Can’t Be A Verse,
Here Is A New Disease It A Ko Your Been Infected Someone Pleez Get Sick Seed A Nurse.
^^^weak and uncreative
Up Ya Skillz Ya Verse Lack Creativity Your One In Need What A Name This Guys Diseased
Nah I Seen Ya Battle Im Suprized U Got For Winz Cause Ya Lines Are Ones To Succeed.
^^weak

First bar was good,2nd bar was unoriginal,and 3rd just didn;t hit.Wat ya need to is get rid a uneeded worse.Just put the core of the punch and no more.When ur lines are long....it weakens the punch.


definition of garbage is you, Sick battlin a lame??? yes, i admit its true!
hes "no jerk" so gettin signed means his managers dicks stayin "blue"
^^^OK.....1st line suked
dried up, kid ya flow is damaged...u been dead like prehistoric maggots
eva since u started like a 'homo wit a circumsized dick'..u fell off faggot
^^^Ok....creative
puffin is new to dis cat, somebody had ta teach u bout smokin on hash
but young will neva roll more green than folks wit ARTIFICIAL GRASS
^^^DOPE
your talents no where next to me, as half of 50 u couldnt "disect a G" (unit)
u talk alot so as a child, his moms wanted his vas deferens removed
..................................instead, da doc gave his mouth a vasectomy!!
^^^^too long

This wasa really nice verse.Real creative and fresh concepts.Some lines were a lil longer than they should have been.You had some good wordplay and metas.NIce verse.U killed the other guy

Vote-Sickseed(vote in link below in or I'll have this vote removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589

Voted For: §ick§eed

sick seed took this one was feeling his verse more betta flow structure both was stretched but young looked less organized you got this vote sick cuz you had better punche spersonal and flow and i enjoyed ya verse more

v/sick

This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 

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