Forever (Remix) *unfinished
 

Forever (hot remix)

Chorus
See I chick like me, gonna smoke on dat green till I get lit
Spray a couple glocks, don’t stop till dey get hit
Have a nigga toes curlin way pass 6 in da morn
Keep stakin doe, once we get dis money when we hit rich
Still on da grind, flippin dro till I get rich
Double all my worth, now I’m back hot spinnin on chrome
Eckos (now I’m back hot spinnin on chrome)

V1
Stay on da grind, all da time, I’m da hottest chick in dese streets
In da back, sippin yack, smackin bitches wit my heat
All da time never sleep, got all dese bitches grillin me
hatin me, cuz I got dey niggas tryin 2 fuck wit me
Fuck wit me, got ‘em spending money, got em wif’n me
Neva dat, niggas always know how dem tru hustlas be
Hustla g, keep dem 24’s on my caddy truck
See me in da club, papi gon already know whats up
High as fuck, always got a bag of dat sticky green
Play wit me, and da end results u ain’t gon wanna see
Stay wit heat, got some shit to put yo faggot ass 2 sleep
Six feet deep, let dese busta see how real its ‘spose 2 be
Hot as fuck and can’t none of yall niggas fuck wit me
keep it streets, neva ease up when dese bitches start 2 trippin
cuz to lil mama its really nothing just fa me to pop a clip in

Chorus

See I chick like me, gonna smoke on dat green till I get lit
Spray a couple glocks, don’t stop till dey get hit
Have a nigga toes curlin way pass 6 in da morn
Keep stakin doe, once we get dis money when we hit rich
Still on da grind, flippin dro till I get rich
Double all my worth, now I’m back hot spinnin on chrome
Eckos (now I’m back hot spinnin on chrome)

Damn..............You seem to be a hard female. N if you do what you say you be doin Then not only do you look bangin u be bangin anyways back to the OM.. Everything was on point
still could of used some work but i was likin it. Everything went together and it flowed nicely. 7.5/10 keep doing ya thang. I'll help ya finish it if ya want.

P.S. Plz during all that you do........dont let another nigga or bitch mess up ya face on anything cuz you are too beautiful for that to happen. Keep ya angel livin good N i know u iz a good mommy.

Hollar atta Dollar

okay... most everything you spat was filler...

come with a good topic... you had shit that ive heard a million times from foxy brown, queen, eve and other whack MCs... except queen..BUT ANYWAY, you need more emotion. if i heard this on a track id fucking laugh my ass off... fuck this whole, GIRL PRIDE SHIT... write emotions... you got the overies enough to spit, now spit about shit thats worth being said.
fuck this AFIRMATIVE ACTION shit... go for the gold and spit something raw...

thats all ima say...come back another time with an emotional peace
now hit my link

pz

thank yall for yall feed back.......oh and imma keep my face beautiful papi...jp......... :thumbup:

damn ma u came hard on diz & i like dem block chicks ...mmm overall good writing again 4 ya keep it up i can't wait 4 ur next drop 9.5/10