Ma First Dropp
 

Theres a chain of wack rappas that start from a and end~at~z//
Who made they fame from rappin bout rims and beefin wit some enimies//
Pass this e-mail on tell the whole world that cb~is~here//
Tell em that they shuld listen to the track cuz u noe the king~is~here//
No bling~in~here itz jus me rappin bout some real~shit//
No flappin my jaws bout nuttin while yall fagz on some seal~shit//
Sit back and grab some popcorn as the unfortunate events unfold//
Killin these ninjahs for not passin on the letta of these stories untold//
But dont worry i wont start rappin bout how many clips my gun~holds//
Talkin bout lyrically on any block i alwayz run~folks//
Cock back and let the mic~blow no tellin whos next to might~blow//
No tellin how many lyricals that my new condenser mic~holds//
But u fuckin wit me unda pressure u just might~fold//
And to be this fuckin great i dont got the be fuckin high~so//
Pass it on spread the word cuz yall know bluntz the new phenomenon//
cherry the 9th wonder of the world so u i guess u can call me ramadan!

Ma first dropp on this site, this is what u can expect from me tha rest of tha time im here.

uppin for feedbaq

this was good man, flow and structure were good, vocab was pretty good also, only thing i found bad about it was the //, no need for that man, it makes it harder to read, keep it up, and RTF on my om Worth It

thnks for tha feedbaq, still uppin