Ambient vs Attila The Hun
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate
No d/r

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-27-05 at 09:40 AM

Must drop verse in 55 minutes after check in.

Ambient has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 09:10 AM.

Attila The Hun has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 09:12 AM.

relate to your surroundings, your skill is nothing but a fable.
he's like goldie locks, ambients stealing everything i bring to the table!
your styles piss-poor, your rhymes? personified as shit.
and i'm not holding a grudge, i'm just beating you with it.
surpass ya trash, blast 30.
^ we all hoping you make ya career like my last line & quit early.

1st line - ambient means surroundings, or to relate to it. you should get it.

g/l.

Voted For: Ambient

Meh
Weak battle
some ok ish by ambient though

ur stuck, and one thing is certain, ur rhymes are weakbitch
Only way you'll win is on shear luck, ur so sheepish

Only punch with an attempt to creativity i quite liked it

where

your styles piss-poor, your rhymes? personified as shit.
and i'm not holding a grudge, i'm just beating you with it.

Ur best bar and was ok felt not creative as ambient tho

Stay up

Voted For: Ambient

iight openor sick for real i love it lol it was a good openor thats all you need but ya 2nd bar was good too attila your verse was good but not ass good dawg good verse ambient i liked it enjoyed it and you had punches personal flow and structure

v/ ambient

Voted For: Ambient

relate to your surroundings, your skill is nothing but a fable.
he's like goldie locks, ambients stealing everything i bring to the table!
nope
your styles piss-poor, your rhymes? personified as shit.
and i'm not holding a grudge, i'm just beating you with it.
okay
surpass ya trash, blast 30.
^ we all hoping you make ya career like my last line & quit early.
decent


Your one of the wack ppl, all ur important stuffs missin
I'm quick to crush these types....
& this aint no keyboard demolition
aight
Be quick to listen, coz im here to fuck you up
Ur proven weak everytime... u attempt to push your luck
nope
ur stuck, and one thing is certain, ur rhymes are weakbitch
Only way you'll win is on shear luck, ur so sheepish
okay

overall.. battle wasn’t good.. but amb took this one..
punches were just simply a little-harder than Attila’s

Voted For: Attila The Hun

Flow-Ambient......Attila's last line fucked up the flow.And in a short battle like dis.....one line matters.

Punches-Atiila......Ambeint had too much self glorifing and gangster talk.He lacked the punches badly.

Personals-Neither....both of you had disses that could be directed to almost anyone.

Multis-Ambient.....Atta had a reallly basic and newbish rhyme shceme.

Vocab.-Attila....both had good vocab....but Attila had it better.Esspeciially since ambient was used as a punch.

Originality-Both of you need to up creativity...but Attila had one creative punch with the ambient one.

Vote-Ambient(vote in link below or this vote will be removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

Voted For: Attila The Hun

this wasn't a really good battle. punches were really poor and there was no personals in sight. attila's verse seemed to be a lot more intelligent than ambient's verse due to better vocab and his structure was more definable. but that was about it as there was no proper wordplay in this entire battle. both of these verses seemed kinda rushed n shit. both of you need to sit down and think about what you're typing before you put up your verses cos it seems like you were just typing the first thing that comes into your head when you battle. start from basic things like tryna use more complex rhyming structures and metas. both of you need to elevate for real.
but i still thought attila had the all round better verse so he won this.

Voted For: Ambient

Your one of the wack ppl, all ur important stuffs missin
I'm quick to crush these types....
& this aint no keyboard demolition
Be quick to listen, coz im here to fuck you up
Ur proven weak everytime... u attempt to push your luck

Vs

Nothing


v/ Ambient

Voted For: Ambient

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