Pen N' Paper vs NaRc-UzI
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-30-05 at 06:00 PM

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Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 06:02 PM.

NaRc-UzI has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 06:07 PM.

Narc dont get "cold-feet" cause hes a an "O-G" drinking a "40"
While this bitch only "holds-heat" when hes holding a "coffee"
Your rapping just "bores me" so im gonna rip this bastard faster than a "leopard"
The only disaster your causing is when u start showing the voters ur batteling "record"
Keep relying on miracles cause in this battle "you wont last"
If i "chopped of both ya legs" u probably still think u could "kick my ass"
I aint new to the rap game so when i win this battle it wont be "begginers luck"
To me its strange that you a living legend but when it comes to rapping dog u "really suck"
Are you outta your "mind' or are you just a fucking bitch ass "hood rat"
We might as well "combine" our verses together cuz they both makin you "look bad"

uppin for votes.............................................

aight uppin this battle lets get sum votes aight peeps......nice battle narc....

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Ok
Pen n Paper - he got creative on his punches, nice opener... as well as closing, vocab aight, multi's well played, incredible nameplay LOL

Narc-Uzi - stronger with multi's n wordplay but pen's punches wuz mo' hardhittin, and that nameplayin won the battle

so my vote goes for paper

fair enough ax dogg thanks for voting still uppin................
btw pen n paper nice battle and its all good between us

upping this cmon pplz votes

uppin this lets get sum more votes plz votes upppin

^^^^ I like yo man... you don't complain bout votes... so I'll vote for ya in another battle as award for bain a good looser (not in the bad way, like congratulations na' mean?)
LOL

uppin............................................. .

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

It’s the opener and this battle is already dominated
U can claim u are RAW but ull never get nominated
not bad, noting witty

A fake gangsta tryin to think he knos bout narcotics and uzi’s
Stop telling lies cuz everyone knos u aint got it so don’t push me
nah...

To the limit cuz it aint a gimmick I bring the WAR to RAW
Ur a blemish so u imperfect man so ur just a short flaw
ok

My rhymes will alter ur arrangement screwin ur scheme
Have u wonderin “OREO” while it blackens like cookies n crème
decent

Have u wonderin in the “ocean” and when my punches hit u wont “sea”(see)
Cuz really u are “raw” ur rhymes stink like “raw fish” so think it "narc-sushi"
decent ending

u should of stood more consistent with punches, flow decent, creativeness aight not a bad verse 7/10



Narc dont get "cold-feet" cause hes a an "O-G" drinking a "40"
While this bitch only "holds-heat" when hes holding a "coffee"
played concept aight start thou

Your rapping just "bores me" so im gonna rip this bastard faster than a "leopard"
The only disaster your causing is when u start showing the voters ur batteling "record"
ha good diss

Keep relying on miracles cause in this battle "you wont last"
If i "chopped of both ya legs" u probably still think u could "kick my ass"
sounds like u'r white=kick-my-ass? *no hate* decent

I aint new to the rap game so when i win this battle it wont be "begginers luck"
To me its strange that you a living legend but when it comes to rapping dog u "really suck"
aight

Are you outta your "mind' or are you just a fucking bitch ass "hood rat"
We might as well "combine" our verses together cuz they both makin you "look bad"
ha decent ending

u had harder punches and stood more consistent good drop