jmsbnd07655 vs Astound
 

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Check in by: 06-30-05 at 12:51 PM

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Astound has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-28-05 12:55 PM.

jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-28-05 03:55 PM.

Yo, you a newb, you clearly aint made for this/
For this battle im ‘Living off experience’ like jadakiss/
You probably expected applause when you came in/
But your bars will never be heard like the ‘ying yang twins’/
Of course you wack/
This guy gets caught with queers claimin “I jus’ called for a chat!”/
Incase you ever think you better than me/
I’ll get gold, you’ll get silver, man, you second to me.

yo, no hate man, jus battle rappin. peacee

youre seriously wack as fuck. you dont want none of the barrage man ...
his verses make you think hes making moves, dirtectly into a garbage can.
starvin' fam? looks like it, catching all these clips. ya best re-route ya shit ...
ya face caught 'nuff cartridges... its rumored to have put sega outta business.
there wont be any witnesses. the lifestyle of this dumb whore's evident ...
his idea of holding a bill, is just his gay obsession with our former president.
are you serious trick? fall back, & run away w/ those petty rhymes dude ...
well, if your word is bond, you shouldnt plan to get out of jail anytime soon.

shit, ive lost, lmfao. that woz 1 nice verse yo

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

you know what its kinda weird cos even though astound's verse was set up with a much better structure i was really feeling jms' verse a lot more. the personals werent there but the punch:

This guy gets caught with queers claimin “I jus’ called for a chat!”/

^^^that shit was funny as hell for real. probably the best line in the entire battle.

both of you need to elevate with your wordplay and vocab as the lack of the two made this battle seem too basic and simple.
astound's punches weren't hittin at all, they weren't very good, but i ain't gonna say you're wack cos you might be just gettin nito the swing of things cos i noticed you were new here.
but seriously you two BOTH need to elevate.

But im gonna vote for jms cos i thought his punches were a whole lot funnier and not as poor.

no hate though

Voted For: Astound

LOl This IS funny Im Not Gonna say Much

Astound
You did really good in this battle you hade the only good punchez or shall i say the only punchez and you hade the only good wordplay LOL ....or shall I say the only wordplay LOL Lemme stop but look mayne you take this battle with ease nice drop continue doin wat you do

Jmsbnd
Yo, you a newb, you clearly aint made for this/
For this battle im ‘Living off experience’ like jadakiss/
You probably expected applause when you came in/
But your bars will never be heard like the ‘ying yang twins’/
Of course you wack/
This guy gets caught with queers claimin “I jus’ called for a chat!”/
Incase you ever think you better than me/
I’ll get gold, you’ll get silver, man, you second to me.


Look At Your verse man ...Bad structure and weak punches and used wordplay ....work on yo style man I cant guive you my vote bcuz you didnt win this battle clearly LOL

-peace-

appreciate the vote souljah. but i do agree with stanza aswel. peace

uppin...........

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I Only Need to more Votes then I win It was easy Check it out for me please

yo, i cant vote in battles for sum reason, do u need like over 200 posts or sumthin?

Nawl Mayne ......Its a 20 post min .......................Check it out

Voted For: Astound

Flow-Astound,as jmsb had stretched lines and fuqed up structure.

Punches-Astound.although they were weak,were still punches nevertheless.The other guy had no punches.

Personals-None....both of you need to up your game up in this catergory.

Multis-Astound as the other guy had a basic rhmye shceme.

Voab..-Astound,jmsh.....go to school and pay attention in Lang Arts class.Ur vocab. suked.

Originality-Astound,they other guy was as basic as it can get.

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