DJ Frank The Tan vs Explicit Kontent
 

Battle Rules:

16 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Multies Battle

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-01-05 at 08:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Explicit Kontent has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-28-05 08:10 PM.

DJ Frank the Tan has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-28-05 08:13 PM.

Only straight’ carnage-I-speak, never tarnish-the-beat
Bringin’ the trouble-en’-drama for these garbage-emcees
Like double-edge-katanas when my partisans-swing
Ain’t my fault my words are sharp, it’s just a part-of-my-speach
Ly-ri-call-y I’m Vince motherfuckin Carter-for-three
Rasheed Wallace on D. You crazy, or just retarded-as-me?
Contain my flow? Shit’s leakin out the margins-it-seems
If rappers were cigs, I’d smoke a carton-a-week.
Till my lungs collapse and it gets harder-ta-breath
Till my pulse goes bad n’ my heart-beat-gets-weak
…ceases to flow, like my foes after startin’-a-beef
Who you know that can keep up to tempo with me
Spit dis nice or versa vice, be dis precice-with-the-beat
Despite-what-you-think, I’d kill you with shit I write-in-my-sleep

- yo these qunz'll be 'expandin-ya-qumz'..aint no 'plastic surqery' when E.K 'detatchin-ya-lunqz',
- when mah 'qat-boomz-u-run'..so when i put the 'heat to ya bunz' it aint cause ima be 'brandin-u-son'//1

- take a peep how mah 'tek-lookz'...fuck around u'd think u had a 'headache' the way mah qunz have ya 'head-shook',
- this dude couldnt 'catch' me with his 'best-hook'..thats why dudez 'flip' thru his 'posts' like 'students' and 'colleqe text-books'//2

- ayo ima be 'pokin-ya-spine'..qive this niqqa a 'shotty' and have em 'smokin-inside'..keep the 'fo-in-da-ride',
- ya folks 'hope-u-survive'..cause the only time you had a 'qood line' was when he was 'quotin-my-rhymez'//3

- im 'rippin-u-open'..'kickin-ya-thoart-in'..for 'thinkin-im-jokin'..
- only time u qettin 'waves' iz when u 'sink-in-da-ocean',
- haha..props? this niqqa only qetz a 'hand' in his room with his 'dick-n-some-lotion'//4

- ayo why u droppinq-a-waste?...when you aint NEVER actually been 'on track' like you been 'mockin-a-race',
- i'll be poppin-ya-face..cause like 'clorox' i'd let ya label 'spot'-be-'erased'..
- know y u edited so much cause u found new shit to 'copy-and-paste'//4

- put his face-2-hurt..this fake-qets-murked..qunz show..this niqqa turnin 'blue' like he a 'replacement-smurf',
- F.U'll catch '7 in da back' like i qot hiz 'dayz-reversed'..this shit's like battlin 'no showz' niqqaz..now i qotta 'WASTE-A-VERSE'//5

- spittin that weak-fire?..fuck around qunz'll 'suck ya stomach' makin ya seem-'liter',
- this dream-fiqhter..he'z only pissed cause NOBODY qave a FUCK bout him when he RETIRED//6

- this dude'll sure catch the beam-in-him..not even his son has belief-in-him,
- u'z a 'sidewalk' niqqa qet 'qreased-wit-timbz'..he hates D-Rex and now the dude wantz to team-wit-him?//7

Switch It up

lemme show ya the "rhythm and rock" that i "spit from the top"//
ill cause ya "livin to stop" when you get "hit wit the shots" that "spit from glock"//
Im a graff writer- I'll make ya red pigments "mix wit the block" while ya "infants'll watch"//
you gettin "mentioned should stop"- u got ripped what?..3 times in a day bythe "strap ons ya got?"//
on the mic ya "label bringin lazy shit"- ill disgrace ya name so bad, watch this "fool need an alias"//
straight up..ya "do need sum crazy shit" to even "move me to raise a fist"//
you get "bruised beat and shanked wit shit" so ungodly that my "fans seemin atheist"//
whyd this "dude even say his spit?".. u wont get past the net.. your a feild goal by the "New England Patriots"//
I put shit "in ya head man"- give ya a heart attack, turn ya "into Fred San(ford)"//
ya act like Hammer and say Cant Touch This- well my hammer say a "clip of lead can"//
i need "nicorette man" for lyrically smokin more ppl then "hitler's set plan"//
so before ya feel the heat I'll put two read dots on ya face like a "gingerbread man"//

Are you gonna drop your verse, or what man? It's been about an hour now.

16 bars right? I count 30, and there is no fucking doubt in my mind that you bit that bullshit.

Bit man please. You verse wasnt even close to 16 bars more like 5 or 8 bars.

14 bars, learn how to count. And I'm pretty sure you bit the second half of your verse because it's on this guy's pager from June, 11th.

http://www.rapbb.com/forums/printvi...813efc7843ae3ea

lemme show ya the "rhythm and rock" that i "spit from the top"// ill cause ya "livin to stop" when you get "hit wit the shots" that "spit from glock"//Im a graff writer- I'll make ya red pigments "mix wit the block" while ya "infants'll watch"// you gettin "mentioned should stop"- u got ripped what?..3 times in a day by "dickumz da ox?"// on the mic ya "crews bringin lazy shit"- ill disgrace ya name so bad, watch this "fool need an alias"// straight up..ya "do need sum crazy shit" to even "move me to raise a fist"// you get "bruised beat and shanked wit shit" so ungodly that my "crew's seemin atheist"// whyd this "dude even say his spit?".. u wont get past the net.. your a feild goal by the "New England Patriots"// I put shit "in ya head man"- give ya a heart attack, turn ya "into Fred San(ford)"// ya act like Hammer and say Cant Touch This- well my hammer say a "clip of lead can"// i need "nicorette man" for lyrically smokin more ppl then "hitler's set plan"// so before ya feel the heat I'll put two read dots on ya face like a "gingerbread man"// Every word is a grenade- verbal shrapnel is "splatterin this whores"//why you "battlin wit 'phor?".. one punchline could cave ya chest, betcha "ass'll meet the floor"//Step up and I'll cut ya fuckin vocal cords.. like the government cuts "cash to feed the poor"// take a vitamin, next to me ya look smaller than the dick on an "Academy Award"// my "baretta stores a clip" that if aimed at ya nuts could make ya "forevermore a chick"// ya shoulda never "stepped to 'phor ya bi**" cause shit, be honest.. my "repertoire is sick"// I'll go Enron on ya rhyme book- I'll "shread ya borin shit"// f*** it, I'll diss myself to help ya.. I'ma produce more cuts than that bi** "meta4ik's wrists"//

You're a biter, shut up.

Voted For: DJ Frank the Tan

Flow-DJ Frank easily because he strucured his verse better.Explicit....look at DJ's verse and write ur shit like dat.

Punches-DJ......despite havin some played out concepts and a weak verse.Explixit....ur shit was comprised of a ton of glorifing and gangsta talk and not punches.

Personals-None......I didn't see any and if there was any....I missed it because it was weak.Both y'all need more of it.

Multi's-Easily Dj the Frank....expilicit ur rhmye sheme was really unenticing.

Vocab.-DJ Frank....Explicit,i didn;t notice any vocab aside from the ordinary words used in everyday speech.

Originalty-DJ....although his was played...Explicit barely had any punches.

Total blowout here

Vote-DJ Frank the Tan(please vote in link below or I'll have to Dq this vote)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196078

OOh shit.....then I voted for nutin....you can Dq this guy by reportin it.

But can ya still drop a vote in the link I posted in my vote please because I took the time to check ur battle out?

This was feedback posted for Explicit Kontent
 

Explicit = you went way over your own bar limit..



DJ = you didn't even come close to the limit..