~women~
 

Airbrushed, mocked up, nothin real, plastic ills, elastic
sicilcone gel, can’t even except the fact they are
imperfect and still goin to hell.
Beauty may be the key, to landing sex for free,
but ya inside rotten to the core, girl wash yaself
I can smell ya from the door.
their bodies as instruments, guys takin them up
and usin them throwin em away on some whim.
Degratin women w/ morals and values
Statures of limatations we all need to see to
that we need the Bible in the worst kind of way
Women these days potrayed as slaves.
Point of view is this, women are expected to take a hit
expected to look all beautiful and legit, when they still feel ugly
on the inside and are a selfish b****.
Average girls have no chance, sittin cryin in their room
cuz they aren’t invited to the dance, or she didn’t get that promotion
cuz fake ass sucked her way, all day to the top, and got better pay
The ones with morals ain’t gettin no props, just being
hated on by guys who use girls as pit stops, thinkin its cool
to stick their dick in a seaspool, let me tell ya the rule, it’s a sin
to screw w/o a ring dude.
Next time ya layin in bed thinkin about the piece u just had, look
you objectified her now she’s had, she a thing, nothing more, no
sadness on ur ad.
Think about a girl who will stick by ya always, ya past forgivin
some even ya ways, not of real high standard and always understands
that a man, is goin to be a man, but this my friend ain’t a man, its just
a boy who can’t control or understand.

this was good, good topic, good flow, structure, and vocab, imagery was there also, great read from top to bottom, keep it up

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