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My Bloc
Dawg you cant handle my bloc cuz its to hot to~handle dont leave a dope car on my bloc or my niggas will start to~dismantle My bloc is hard not made fo~pussy's we'll leave you soft niggas layin on ya~tushy's My bloc full of gangsta's and~killah's theres so much murda jus like in da~thrilla's My bloc made fo sellin crack and~shit niggas getin in to deep so dey cant git out of~it My bloc is hot so ima hot~boy lil niggas on my bloc play wit guns fo~toys My bloc is on a~hustle everytime my crew walk on stage we gotta flex our~muscles My bloc is~smokin niggas gittin high in dey homes coughin and~chokin My bloc will pull a jack~move so git off my bloc or you'll git jacked~dude |
Needin some feedback on dis
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uppin :shoot: ....
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still workin on it...keep workin on it ..u new to it so ya kno keep up u gwan get it try to become more complex in ya rhymin good try with the multies and da flow was cool..
i'm not in red like usual but i dont feel like it... Church |
jea thankz fo da feedback
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coulda been better for a concept like this u gotta bring heat the rhymes were simple and typical and the flow wasnt different so it was average and it was short so this drop need improvement keep elavatin man
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jea thanks fo da feedback
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Bump Bump :shoot:
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Flow silly with nobility like a king this type thing is royalty
Clings to loyalty when dealing with rap like Jackson, Latoya be Reading palms and proceeding calm with success not dumb Verses be delivering them bold while shivering and cold from Snowfall my flow all ice but right and nice like white rice and rum No sense nagging it causes intense haggling like high prices Outrageous but advantageous to shop around town end the crisis Not dodging the doors where bargain galore with food make sacrifices |
yo wat r u doin jus leave feedback not yo rhymes iight
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man MADDRAPPER u got a probleme seriously, ur almost 1000post and still postin anywere
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LOL! yo. you got skillz, u jus gotta know where to post your rhymes! as for Yung trae-my bloc, this woz actually aight you know, a bit basic in places, nd i had to check my flow a couple of times, but it woz alright. 7/10 |
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