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Responsibility was given to him since he was young/
all he did was work and get hit, there wasnt time for any fun/
father's a drunk, mommas a ho',but he doesnt know what he has in sto'/
everybody knew he had an incredible, mind busting "flow"/
turned 18 walked out on his momma and spat at his father/
they pleaded for him to come back but he didnt even bother/
his friend was like a good pal maybe even a bro/
but beefs and money problems made his protection "low"/
it was the unnecessary bets he couldnt pay off, that brought threats/
one problem brought his friends life to an end/
only if he would of paid, instead of paying to get laid/
well thats life in Brooklyn.

"Theres always someone on top of you in the food chain"

LOL

tight first OM homie... nice emotions and creativity

OK:
try ta fix-up structure so flow improves na' mean?
Multi's r needed to make that shit realy hot

but for first OM, bein a good one its an 8/10

jea i agree wit ax but dis was ight fo a first