Me On The Mic
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/straightaim_music.htm

yo i actually spit on this one...so what u hearin is ME and ME alone..i just did sumthin small i'm just givin ya a preview i might ad onto it or make it a collab...i know i aint the best yet but im workin at it...leave me ur honest feed and i'll RTF

here's my links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197063
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197074

work on ya flow...and delivery....it sounded like you were just flowing all over the beat...almost lyke you were talking....i dont realli lyke that beat anyways....and spend extra time to perfect ya sound quality on the track.....

..........ya mic is terrible.... 3 year old baby???? wtf yo.... you have no type of flow, no lyrics you have no emotion, a terrible voice and all around no type of attempt to ride the beat.... wow and it just cut out out of nowhere.... hmmm... no offence, but this mite just get my "worst audio EVER" award man.... congratulations! cuz... im really not kidding... but keep tryin cuz every1 elevates... but u got a long road ahead of u...

Fuck You........

the trebel in this killed my ears

good beat

ur flow is kinda lazy tongue-ish


interesting track


it just seemed like you were talking


that kinda flow works when u got dope delivery

and u fell a lil short with it here


decent

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werd u talk told ya famz upp yo flow and delivery and itll be str8 and yes fukk omen have u heard his audio nuthing to brag about..................

^lol.... damn yo im gettin haters everywhere... sorry he asked for feed, if he didnt want my oppinion he shouldnt have posted it... thats how tha game is, not every1 is gonna suck his dick like u... im just givin him truth that he needs to elevate... plus i know i can crush u so keep my name outta ur mouth... thanx :thumbup:

he is kinda right seriously...the omen is just an honest "feedbacker" lol but yo Straight Aim youll elevate.;.just buy a new mic thats all