criminal vs M.C.
 

Battle Rules:

Quick 6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-29-05 at 01:56 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

M.C. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 01:17 PM.

Weak punches is all you carry, there not going to hit
“This is only the beginning,”..
..but you don’t have nothing to begin with*
But, fucka of beating, I’ll literally smash this dude
If this verse is wack..
..then you actually have nothing to lose
Told me to bring my a-game, yeah, but you won’t bring shit*
You have no skillz, and this is why someone needs to..


*“This is only the beginning” = in his sig
*He told me to bring my a-game

criminal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 01:38 PM.

Most who are REAL feel my flow, but I always Knew-More-Cowards-Doubted-It * M.C *
but I’ll STILL “put ya lights out” on a larger scale than “New-York-Power-Outages”!

ya skills a joke better known as a FAGGOT clowns, this Wacky-Coward’s-Bars-is-Girly
Whether you planned on “getting messed up” or not, Happy-Hour’s-Startin-EARLY!

It’s Insane I Became-Rap's-New-Don…
maybe cuz,
the only time ya “text could SCAR me forever” is if i got your Name-TATTOO’D-ON!!!...

blah i had 10 but then notice u only ask for 6 lines

uppin this.....

uppin this.....

Voted For: criminal

this battle was weak as hell for real. but i'm leave my opinion anyway. both of you need to work on all aspects of your lyrical styles for real. without a shadow of a doubt.
but criminal actually took this one.
don't get it twisted you both had really....really wack verses but criminal managed to pull through this battle.
this verse lacked hard hitting punches, decent vocab, and there was seriously weak wordplay from him. but this was still better than the quality-less verse from MC.
i couldn't find any decent aspect about his rhyme and on top of that his structure was really off.
In fact this is the main thing that swung my favour in criminals way cos content wise, neither of you had winning material.
Anyway. Criminal had the very slightly better verse so he gets this win.

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Voted For: criminal

Aii

Criminal

U did Aii man Yor structure threw your flow out the windown man And thats what u really need to work on Really abd and it makes your style look newbish and rookiesh if you ask me and I Think That you Need to try to Mix up Your wordplay and punchez a lil better than you did in this battle Oevrall But I Think That you do Take this battle :)

MC

You dropped pretty weak and pretty quick small ine and Uneven structure and you didnt supply hard hitting punchez all you had was an aii concept which will not help you win a bttle these days .....So You dont take this battle bud srry

i bet mc had our votes taken of cos he can't accept that he lost this battle.
doin shit like thats the best way of making sure your battles never get looked at or voted on by anyone.

Voted For: M.C.

meh

mc got this one, he had witty punches, a nice personal and an okay personal....and his was creative/funny...quote was pretty aight, criminal, i dunno...you had okay concepts, but nothing really that great....you're wording and vocab was a little off, and your attempts at multi punches just made your punches sound whack....like the second bar came off really stupid....so you need to elevate wording of punches....you know how to form punches, you had decent punches, just nothing stood out cause your wordplay sucked.....word,

v/MC....RTF in the link in my sig

what are u fuckin talkin bout? ..shit was like that..
..since u whine so much.. battle me then, or fuck off

^^^ oo-its on mother fucker peep open mic for ya diss and fuck undestructable emcees EZ!!!!

lol.. that's y u have no crew? stfu.. dbz-faggot..

uppin this battle