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Marshall Mathers vs accomplish
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accomplish has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 07:15 PM.
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Marshall Mathers has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 07:19 PM.
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By clickin' accept, man, you jus accepting defeat
Like holdin' a vegetable, I'll leave you feelin' "beat" You're jus full of shit, man, it's like you spittin' turd You're weak, like Atticus Finch, you couldn't "Kill a Mockingbird" You ain't got shit, I'll beat you, man, you weak You're future depends on your dreams, so I'll put your ass to sleep I'm gonna kill this herb, I'm really about to whore, dude If you can't laugh at yourself, then bitch, i'll do it for you |
stop biting peoples names cuz your 2 dumb to think of your own your skill ain't dope and it's been left abandoned in a pile of shit unknown your not eminem bitch ya more feminem with a pussy who listens to music like robbie williams milleniem this guy's steppin in hot water in this battle he gets slaughterd how about i leave this battle while I go fuck your daughter Yea... you got four wins aswell as four fucking chins and you have a dick size of one centremeter pins your not marshall..... just cuz you dress like him if eminem knew ya he'd problebly swing on you fighting... |
Voted For: Marshall Mathers
accomplish man, you used all fake personals....and how you know he has a daughter and a small penis, haha....that was poor, no creativity, no REAL personals....nothing stood out, it was too basic, and they weren't effective at all....get some better concepts yo marshall, looks like you dropped weak, but it was funny and killed him, haha.....some played shit, stayed consistent though, finisher made me laugh, no personals, but oh well....killed him with just punches, creativity was there, kinda....still won this by far man, keep up.....word v/MM, rtf with an explained vote |
This was feedback posted for Marshall Mathers
u suk dick.............................................. .
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Voted For: accomplish
Aii Overall i Think That Accomplish Takes this battle im not goin into a whole lot of explanation ..............Except flow- MM Punchez- Acc personal- Acc Multies- N/A Vocab- Acc Originalit- Acc So Overall Accomplish takes this battle But it was still pretty weak if you ask me Srry :( |
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Although his name is a piss take and wack as fuck he gets my vote. He came harder with punches and what took it away frm acc was that his verse was too boring, the wordplay in marshals verse is the reason he takes it. Both flows were off and struture was meh but.. Both need to elevate, marshal looks to have a lot of potential. |
V// Marshal mathers....dunno why i couldnt poll it?!
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^I kno wack shit yo :(.............................
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upping this shit..................................
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Voted For: Marshall Mathers
Hahaha, good shit Marshall, Tech ure verse was good aswell man....punches better in Marshalls, ures wasnt really hard hittin, it was funny dont get me wrong but not really hard......and that feminem line has been used soooooo many times.....anyways best line: I'm gonna kill this herb, I'm really about to whore, dude If you can't laugh at yourself, then bitch, i'll do it for you Hahhaaahaha jokes right there |
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