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Punishin
Scars feedin pain I’m needin
water to quench this thirst I have leanin on God to heal me fast. If He don’t I’m fadin at last witherin like a leaf without a cast. Help me not dry up and give me strength to drink a sup. Needin energy, not gettin any. Lord punishin me for not representin plenty of times I stumbled and plenty of times I mislead, trying to act like a Christian but falling instead. Now I’m goin through torment, my world going to crap Quicker than I eva expected like sand in a hourglass my life is rejected. Tryin to live my life uncredited to anyone anything I bet my life unselected Lost everything I worked for, everything I loved my life going down a hole and I’m digging up sod Cryin to the Lord, help me outta this mess, I can’t do it w/o you, I can’t pass this test All a sudden the phone rings, on the other end a legit deal is made, I got a job at a local arcade, gonna make some dough in the right kinda way. Call up my folks tellin what went down My momma said she was prayin 4 my life to turn around We all were cryin as I hung up the phone, I can pay my rent and keep what I own! I told God I would need his guidance but I would present myself tell everybody how I recommited myself, got on with my life and love through all else..recompense, nonsense I'm goin on no more comment. |
this was good, real good flow and structure, nice use of vocab, emotion, and imagery, keep it up
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Nice drop
good vocab overall 6/10 |
Got a nice drop there hommie, Nice structure, Nice Vocab, I liked how you expressed your emotion through the lyrics, Good Job with that.. Over good shit.. I reat it at 8/10
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thanks ya'll uppin.
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