KhAoZ ThEoRy vs E.C
 

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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 08:42 AM.

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 08:44 AM.

learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,
your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,
ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,
as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma herbivore",
you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws,

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Explanations:

herbivor... herb... vegitarian beef in battles... simple wordplay... thats all i need to explain i thinkk.... pz

E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*
ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**
we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker
i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief
if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses


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Explanationz-
*=In hiz profile hiz intrest in basketball & rapping
**=Skateboarding haz da game ''horse'' an if a horse trips & fallz in da race they get shot lol


*=

ight good verse... lets get some vote in here......

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy


E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*
^^nah...this a lil uncreative and weak,4/10
ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**
^^nice flow....Ok punch....7/10
we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker
^^2nd a bit too long...but ight...6/10
i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief
^^1st line played..2nd ight....5/10
if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses
^^not a good closer....4/10

This was an OK verse.No fillers.Some lines could use some compression as it fuqed up flow.A lil uncreative.Closer was dissapointing.Some played lines like Star Wars and beef ones.

learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,
^^Ok rip on name...7/10
your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,
^^^nah...1st line filler...weak...3/10
ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,
^^^Basic and played..2/10
as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma herbivore",
^^^Beef lines are played.....3/10
you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws
^^nope.....4/10

U were just weak.U started off OK with a decent rip onhis name.But the rest was whack.Sleep with fishes?...that's a played out metaphor.It's been used endlessly in mafia movies.Stop with beef lines too.It's just gotten redundant.

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uppin for votessssssss plzz and make em fair votes lol at k-trini's

Voted For: E.C

KhAoZ ThEoRy

E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*
^ good opener on his profile & punch at the end

ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**
^ ok bar coulda been worded better though IMO

we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker
^ it's ok again coulda been worded better personal there though

i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief
^ na...not feelin this diss is there punchlione is weak

if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses
^ stretched closer...puch aight but flow fucked it up

Overall
Verse was ok in places and not in others flow was not consistant disses were there but again inconsistant average verse IMO...also lose the text slang it dumbs down your vocab...it ain't needed...

E.C Verse

learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,
^ oo good opener on his vocab hard personal/punch

your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,
^ hmm not as good as the opener punch pretty basic

ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,
^ na...punch there but the layout was meh

as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma herbivore",
^ lol good rhyme picked up now good punch

you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws,
^ ok closer...good rhyme

Overall
Opener was dope fell off after that and picked up again...inconsistant but punches were more effective played off his name more effectively than K.Theory vocab was better easier to read...i think you got this but in places you looked as if you struggled...but win you will IMO...but close battle

V/E.C...RTF in my sig within 3 days or vote removed (vs MaRVJay1009 *if he ain't blacklist ya -_-*)

diz iz da wrong battle, i didnt give u da link 2 diz, vote on da battle i left da link with