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the new generation of RV... sigh
New hopes of rap music crystlizing at the top of the game's surface
New generations of emcees making the struggle seem worthless I've replied to many emcees hard work and strenuous labor I'm just estatic when i see that three or four of them return the favor Fake emcees that cant go a stanza without self glorification These are the people building the new Rap Verse foundation Searching for hours to find a decent person to do a collaboration Fagits dont realize rap is some sort of a moral obligation Nows the time to step up and fight agaist this infestation short,,, but i had to say something |
thhank you... uppin!
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its good
overall 6/10 |
lmfao yo this shits tripped out n also true! yo nice vocab this was a perfect lil piece your shyt was
8/10 nice shyt homie ~1~ |
This was pretty good man... True as well... Lemme give you a piece of advice though, when you rap an uneven amount of lines it kills your flow... Other than that it was pretty much flawless... I give you an 8/10, since you needed one more line...
Check out my new OM called "Back at it", if you havent already... |
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Yo a nice piece here man, I liked reading it, Some truth in those word.. Good Structure as well Good Drop Hommie...
Return the Fav Hommie http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197591 |
ty for the feed everyone.. uppin for some more!
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yo kid....
nice to see you back, having a handle on your words :)....expressed nicely, emotion was good.....but what anxiety said, make your verse even, killed the flow, and a little of the enjoyment....word but keep up man, collab if you want to....just give me a topic :shoot: |
uppin this shit for some more feedback
... thanks kess :) lol |
uppiN this shit for some more feed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin this for some more feedback!
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liked this man, as stated ^ a lot of truth in this, nice flow and vocab usage, keep it up.........please RTF on one of my om's, again nice job
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