blazinballa421 vs tekneek
 

Battle Rules:

5 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-30-05 at 01:33 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 01:03 PM.

blazinballa421 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 01:04 PM.

AIGHT ERES MY VERSE OFF LAST BATTLE.

I’m gonna ‘pop’ ya with the way I’m ‘Crush’in you.....
And make you ‘feel like shit with the way I’m ‘flushin’ you.....
It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week)......
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period).....
My rhymes shot bullets and ur the one i'm gunnin for next.......
they'll flip ur chin back like u got PEZ in ur neck......
there's no option other than to accept a sad plight.....
this battle for you will reflect ur success on this site.....
B-B ur rapping is over, see if anybody still cares......
cuz u won't be sayin shit, like Stephen Hawking without his wheelchair......

ma name says it all.. ur bout ta get blazed..ur tekneek is worse than a kid in third grade // fucks tek i roll wit macs hot shells go at ya chest but come out ya back//and ma parents took me to the doctor cause they kno im sick// MY TEKS bust quick like a virgin dick//ayo tek...why did u even try?// ya rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high// and ill leave tek redder than ketchup..when it comes to this rap shit ya gonna come andcatch up//8 bars is what im giving this con..you mite as well call urself a toilet cause u just got shitted on//

aight uppin this for votes............................

This was feedback posted for blazinballa421
 

fix your structure. .....

uppin this........................................

Voted For: Tekneek

ma name says it all.. ur bout ta get blazed..ur tekneek is worse than a kid in third grade //
ok...kind of played
fucks tek i roll wit macs hot shells go at ya chest but come out ya back//
gunplay=LAME unless you are usin it in a way no one else has heard it
and ma parents took me to the doctor cause they kno im sick// MY TEKS bust quick like a virgin dick//
haha nice...
ayo tek...why did u even try?// ya rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high//
this is a no no
and ill leave tek redder than ketchup..when it comes to this rap shit ya gonna come andcatch up//
ok word play but i heard it befo
8 bars is what im giving this con..you mite as well call urself a toilet cause u just got shitted on//
ehhhhhh...but i thought toilets get shitted in...somebody tell me somethin


breakdown-verse wasn't all that bad..for a newbie this is pretty good....this guy tek is a lil more advanced but if you keep elevating and not usin all that gunplay you can do a lot...also add a lil more complexity makes the verse look better...



I’m gonna ‘pop’ ya with the way I’m ‘Crush’in you.....
And make you ‘feel like shit with the way I’m ‘flushin’ you.....
ok...nice wordplay
It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week)......
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period).....
haha both lines had me rollin
My rhymes shot bullets and ur the one i'm gunnin for next.......
they'll flip ur chin back like u got PEZ in ur neck......
ok
there's no option other than to accept a sad plight.....
this battle for you will reflect ur success on this site.....
eh
B-B ur rapping is over, see if anybody still cares......
cuz u won't be sayin shit, like Stephen Hawking without his wheelchair......
nice


Breakdown-your verse was obviously a lot more advance then blazins...you kind of fell of at the "success on this site line" but the whole verse overal was pretty good

NICE BATTLE.......RETURN THE FAVOR

thx.............uppin

uppin this shit