un-fuck-widable vs Verbal_Pain
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-01-05 at 02:20 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Verbal_Pain has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 02:21 PM.

un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 02:31 PM.

yo im tryin a nu style cause the verse wid the uva guy is an old style which i need to update so dont go all fucked up on me if this aint as gud but w/e tell me which style of mine u like betta have a vote an i will choose whicheva wins


ayo...
u cant touch-me,i love to eat up mc's,n right now im hung-ry
ya lyrics suck,u got better chance to beat me if ya lyrics wer count-ry
im the one to elevate,u sit watch n hate,im the champ lik the pistons
u cant improve,its lik subtractin 0 cuz it aint gon make a difrence
im the lyrical mc wit the hottest nouns,the underground unherd sound
the one to knock you down,like balls wit a BLIND jugglin clown
dunt be mad cuz my raps get hits,back quick,wen they dunt like ya shit
ur a special child,one who wuld lose MUSICAL CHAIRS vs a DEAF KID
ha,i'll laugh if i see you on manstream,thas ur biggest dream
but thas never happenin like dead people wit GREAT hygene
im the hottest to be underground,i'll knock out this clown
cuz having a bohner in church is the only time u 'holdin it down'
i bet you aint no G,ur a computer nerd like anotha steve urkel
n u culdnt get a round of applause if i clapped in circles

ha ha

Ending this kids career,destroying his confidence quick
He lacks the ability of creativity,and the courage ta spit

Ima tear this cat, similar ta unwraping a gift i get for christmas
cuz comen down with syphillis, the only way he the sickest

you new ta RV also,so i guess you considered ta be fresh meat
shouldv'e brung ya sun screen and shades cuz ima burn u with heat

homie your not a challenge,prolly wont post and dip* mayne*
u a ho with a pimp who gets control'd daily like a sims game

i know you unemployed,so your wrist?homie ho's say they seen no ice on it
spendin to much time cummin on ya keyboard...i dont see how u can type on it

lyrics sick,so ima continue ta use them to abuse this mark......you suck!
no wonder you cant See Da Point* like the worlds top Amusement Park (think)


Explainations:

Dip=Run
Mayne=Man...(in country accent)
See Da Point= Ceda Point..(in ebonics)..Cedar Point(proper english)

ayo uppin fo votes ppl dont sleep on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

verbal - ur punches were okay here.. the structure was wack
didn't like u set'd it up, but the flow was aight, & the vocab
needs help, but elevate more & work on ur punches though

wid - ur punches weren't all that great here, either.. ur flow
needs some help.. the structure was aight here, but overall
work on ur punches also

Voted For: un-fuck-widable


Flow-Unfuck-widable,structured his shit better and verbal had a line(last) that didn;t rhyme.

Punches-Unfuckwidable,it was close to decide who had it better.Both of you were fasr too basic and weak.

Personal-Neither.......both of you elevate in this.Those verses may have been pre-written.

Mullti's-Unfuckwidable,verbal had only one bar where he didn't rhyme one syllable words.

VocAb.-Though both of you need to elevate.....I'll go with Unfuck-widable.

Originality-Both of you lacked originality.U both need to come up with new conecpts.

Vocab.-Unfuckwidable(drop a vote in link below or this vote will be removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

yo yall dis shit was tight 2 def 4 reel do one of yall wanna do a battle holla back dog

i tried outr this style but i think i will stick wid ma uva style any way 3-0 upping wot duz it go to?

yo.......drop a vote in link I posted at bottom of my vote..........

upping i will vote on urs in a sec trini hold up

yo upping dont sleep plz need one more vote for a win 3-0 so far

upping for votes ppl

upping............................................ ..