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Texxus 06-30-05 05:20 PM

Im Back!!!
 
Im back!!!Ryhmes been flossed and Im here to set it off
Goin for 10wins and have no loss,Im sick!I make myself cough
Ya pressin ya luck kid,try nuckin me for a buck kid,
Ya might aswell suck dick kid,Before ya get stuck kid
And shave ya dome like you.were.in.the Army Kid
I aint here to play games,Im here to dismantle some names
Seprate the Hot from Lame,Surgically rearrange ya frame
Boy ya better think twice about ones ya fuck wit
Cuz gunplay come in handy when it get hectic
And I dont want ya momz sending me Medical Bills
Cuz Ill leave ya family fuck up like it was on Dr.Phils
Really theres no point in gunnin cuz verbal skills take care of it
And I know ya girl love it,cuz i take it to her like.................
..............................it cum straight out the oven
And I serve them rocks like it was by the dozen cousin
Shit to crack jokes,I throw bad words in ya mouth..............
..................................to make ya cou- to a -sin

Kajal 06-30-05 07:03 PM

very basic, you used boring, used concepts throughout. just work on creativity and you should turn out decent.

Texxus 06-30-05 07:16 PM

^^since its comin from some one as yourself...I'll forget about that newb remark you just said.

§ick§eed 06-30-05 09:07 PM

u RAW so u fam.....nice shit like dude said use betta concepts shit wasnt da best

stay up


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