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technique 06-30-05 09:30 PM

heven gates
 
this lifes kinda sad, the way it gets you down
and it's kinda hard when people die and arn't around
but our souls stay together something that'll last forever
we'll all go someplace where we'll know it's better
Trying to get past this pain again, left on my own afraid
I try to do my best on earth but all i get is the rain
live your life to the very best that you can
instead of running away from it try and be the man
I gave it my best shot, now im running away from it all
to much pressure made me fall I don't want to have to crawl
but thats the way life treated me constantly felt it was beating me
where has all the respect gone can't you see that your weakning me
so what should i do now just try and live this life
or should i cut myself and die with using this knife
would anybody feel pain and even feel sorrow
am I going to live this life another day tomorrow
I keep on questioning myself, this is bad for my heath
I wish everyone could enjoy life and have the wealth
but we all know that life can be so unfair
it's like we're living in a world that doesn't even care
whats happened to the human race it's a damn disgrace
everything seems such a waste and im always seeing an angry face
arrogant people with wrong opinions, angry youths stickin middle fingers
yea. thats the world we live in, full of hate and our parents who bring us
lost abuse tormented souls, our violent minds then lose control
left at home feeling trapped from the world and living in a dark hole

technique 06-30-05 09:43 PM

thanks................................

*TaKeOVER* 06-30-05 09:51 PM

Definte Some Deep Ass Shit Like A Fuckin Emotional Roller Coaster 9/10
Rtf ~1ne~

technique 06-30-05 10:08 PM

drop a link messenger and i'll drop some feed back. Thanks for love so far. keep posting feedback..

Christianite 06-30-05 10:39 PM

i liked this man, emotion was the best aspect i saw, good flow and vocab was pretty good also, overall nice drop, RTF sometime on one of my om's, keep it up man

2Fast2Furious 06-30-05 10:53 PM

Good use of imagery and emotions evoked on this piece, keep em comin--peace

technique 07-01-05 03:11 PM

upping for more...................


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