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My Situation....hotness in the making
My Situation Verse 1: This situation is filled wit problems and complications
hurt faces, puts the twist on these emotional cases These phases we must get through togetha as one my love for this girl has been,since life itself has begun Its hard to believe how hard it is to see
that what we share is of a greater quality but adults are blinded by irrelevance, hence if they take the time to realize, dis shit makes sense I know its not my love dats making this ship tense (ship=relationship) Chorus: This is my situation
my problems, me hesitatin to promise the fixation of dis heart breakin, troublesome situation Thats all i got so far..im workin on it tho...its gonna be deep.... The story behind that tho is...me and my girl are like in love for real we dont bother any one we just stay to our self and we are like best friends and now our parents startin to interfere and i know yall know how that is...so we just havin problems wit dem but we sat down and had a talk wit dem and its all straight now..but i started writing dis when it was happenin and now ima finish what i started |
good shit son, keep it up and finish it .........i kno how them scenarios b like...lol ...........keep ya head up
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I'd like to see it when you finish it, what you had so far was clearly written from the heart, just putting your thoughts and feelings into words and it's good that you're able to do that. Vocab was good, flow was aight but emotion was strongest aspect, keep it up and finish it or I'll whoop your ass :thumbup: nah just kidding but finish it for real, i'll be looking forward to it |
thanks thanks....uppin uppin.......
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2256368
there go my link on some feed i dropped....... |
aight, this looks like its shaping up to be a nice little OM...good emotion, nice solid idea to work on....although its frustrating reading the spelling/grammatical errors, abrupts the flow and what not....but good so far, keep up with it.....word
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uppin uppin uppin
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