keeping my distance
 

chorus

I keep my distance from everyone
music can make effect you and make you be gone
it's like magic to express my crazy thoughts
that bottle up inside so i let them out with force

yo my mind is complex it effect, twisting emcees necks
if any guy trys to disrespect your ass is gonna get messed
my life is depressed i guess but give me credit for the stress
people try testing me but you know i got skills and blessed
rhymes fully equipped get your fake ass ripped
and get flipped backwards all ya insults just slip
get wipped for talking shit as i split your vocals
anybody got the balls to step on me is gonna fall
in battles i enter war zones, waiting till we battle alone
and beat you so bad that you kick scream and moan
i'll rip your insides out and string them up like curtains
im only happy inside when I know your an emcee hurting
talk is cheap bitch, don't think im'a ever leave
cuz this game needs me i'll come back wid a trick up my sleeve
bad ass, ill spitter, fucked your bitch to see if this dick'll fit her
the rhyme shitter that'll leave ya half eaten and pit yer
you've never heard of an emcee as fucking mad as me
fuck wid me bitch and i'll leave ya bloody mess tragedy
this was real quick but dope

Elevate your vocab!
nice droppin'... tight flow n structure, multi's well played on sum lines... nice hook

Overall - 7/10

yea thanks m8 but it diserves a bit more den a 7 i reckon but anyway...

yea for real this verse was dope wid multies and spitting straight off the top.....

this was pretty good, flow and structure was good, vocab was ok, overall nice job, keep em comin