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.:F.ate:. 07-01-05 10:51 PM

Dear Summer.......
 
it's such a good feelin mayn...Summer, u dont know what u mean to me....let me explain

Dear Summer,
our conversations last into the earliest of the morn 'n
i think of you daily all tha time that you're gone and
Summer,i cant express the way i feel to you one on one
but i hope you'll understand wut i mean by the time i'm done
chea...
every delicate breath you take leaves me in a state of bliss
you're one of heaven's angels i'm sure God'll truely miss
a single kiss from your lips could change my frame of mind
your lovely smile's enough to turn back the hands of time
we've talked but for only days but i'm attracted in a strong way
so please...hear me out, cuz i've got so much to say
forever's but a day when i look in your endearing eyes
and just fantasize about your touch..................then sigh
virgo................aquarius.....relax ma, i'm just comparin us
your looks alone seem to be givin me conversion hysteria
not to mention that i'd like to kiss and touch certain areas
on your body.....then make u fall in love ma i'm tellin ya....
and Summer, it's a bummer that we so far apart physically
but i still feel emotional, we on tha same plain mentally
and somethin says that deep inside u really feelin me
if that aint the truth then please shawdy let me know
but do get at me if u feel tha vibe i'm feelin tho
and all them niggas sweatin u don't even sweat 'em back
cuz trust ya nigga fate can take care of that
but that's anotha story so Summer i guess this is it
so holla back....just let me know if u feel this shit
Dear Summer............

Sixth Sense 07-01-05 11:47 PM

wow kinda took jayz title and u messed it up....lol/jp but man come up wit a diff. title and its ok man nice vocab and structure but still need works on emotions and everythin aight so keep it up

Christianite 07-01-05 11:59 PM

this was pretty good man, decent read from top to bottom, flow and structure were good as well as vocab, keep it up man.......................please RTF on my om Kung Fu Fighting (Gospel Rendition), again nice job man

.:F.ate:. 07-02-05 12:06 AM

i edited it tho..........

.:F.ate:. 07-02-05 12:55 AM

yeah...i'll return tha favor 4 ya'll tomorrow


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