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Whys That? 07-02-05 05:42 AM

The four pyramids of I
 
I
was born smiling
went to sleep crying
raised with lessons and danger
still learning but found dads anger
never hate on a soul even if im souless
aotearoa dreams,bright light visions,stars gone dull
faith in family,still helping with money focusing on winning

I
feel alone
with a entire crew
witnessed my uncle die
nailed the last nail in the coffin
broke the hammer ,lost my familys love
brought tears to many,and smiles to a few
laughed when they cry'd,cry'd when you laughed
gave when you took,took what you gave in spite a god



I
found god
apoligized for hate
found love,gave away hate
met the girl of my life,washed out hate
treated all with respect,slowly lost all hate
forgot what ha,e was couldnt even say the ha,e
loved everything around me,no ha,e could hurt me

I
will wash away
pass away young
be rememberd for my actions
applauded for my loving memorys
a demon of a saint,still serving all gods
be honured with a street servant 21 gun salute
enrich the world with love putting all you ha,e on mute

Payn 07-02-05 10:41 AM

yeah mayne gotta say it was nice, i like tha structure, good shit, but just feel u just touch da surface of ya topic but go in depth wit it next time but keep writing ...fa sho

Whys That? 07-06-05 03:42 AM

^^
werd.

it was sort of a quick thing...yeh i agree alot more depth could of been used.

up^


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