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The four pyramids of I
I was born smiling went to sleep crying raised with lessons and danger still learning but found dads anger never hate on a soul even if im souless aotearoa dreams,bright light visions,stars gone dull faith in family,still helping with money focusing on winning I feel alone with a entire crew witnessed my uncle die nailed the last nail in the coffin broke the hammer ,lost my familys love brought tears to many,and smiles to a few laughed when they cry'd,cry'd when you laughed gave when you took,took what you gave in spite a god I found god apoligized for hate found love,gave away hate met the girl of my life,washed out hate treated all with respect,slowly lost all hate forgot what ha,e was couldnt even say the ha,e loved everything around me,no ha,e could hurt me I will wash away pass away young be rememberd for my actions applauded for my loving memorys a demon of a saint,still serving all gods be honured with a street servant 21 gun salute enrich the world with love putting all you ha,e on mute |
yeah mayne gotta say it was nice, i like tha structure, good shit, but just feel u just touch da surface of ya topic but go in depth wit it next time but keep writing ...fa sho
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werd. it was sort of a quick thing...yeh i agree alot more depth could of been used. up^ |
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