Phatal diss- on lyricalassault.co.uk
 

ye its the quarter finals of some tourney, didnt have time so i did the best i could...


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left feed on artik phrost and tha q

links to follow:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197739
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197706

feed is appriciated thnx

prefer dis beat to ur mad dovg... flow seems better. id say fill ur lines out more to stop dem pauses in ur verse cos it makes ur flow sound choppy jus add a couple ex\tra syllables emotion u need to sound kinda pissed wit da person u on bout n u jus seem tired lol lyrics are cool... ur improvgin but u need more energy n presence n charisma keep it up mate

ight man... thnx for the feed...

nice track feelin it you flowed well to the beat the phatal is debatable bit was good...your elevating fam...keep it up

worddd... lol thnc for the feed fam

beat is a dope battle beat...word to what leady said fill out ur lines more, dem little stops n starts make your verse seem shitty, some aight lines, ur quality is pretty damn nice on dis...Phatal is pretty heavy tho cuz, b interestin 2 c who wins if he showz...

ye.. i was gonna come hard but i didnt have the time i had my extension till sunday but i thought fuck it and recorded it before i went out on friday... i fink the guy is gna post em today the deadline was yesturday lol did u drop?

uppinnnnnnnnnnn

yur british?....

i'd have to agree with the above....fill out ya lines....so the flow comes smoothly....this wasnt bad at all...i dont know the other cat...so i cant comment on the competion....but, nyce drop....keep spittin

lol i will do next time... but the guy was the best on the site so i lost lol....