Tekneek vs Winglistik
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 07-02-05 at 01:33 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 01:03 PM.
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Winglistik has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 01:05 PM.
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yo.
i'll dim your days, put an end to your ways since i blast gays. cuz his only "tekneek" of getting a"head" is swinging both ways. i be whoring you fool. this is just childs play, your raps are poo. since last time you passed the mic...was in jacksons bedroom. look @ my previous lines. i'm better get the jist? ya bound to expire. as this fucking neek will plummet quick as "tek"s pop and fire. |
you could be from the 1960's and still have no flair (flairs)..............
and you be Like dead end roads cuz your goin no where............ 40 mins to write 6 lines and still wins the defeat...... u could burn a turntable...u still wouldnt be hot on the beat........... witta keyboard I smash cats this kid's got whack raps................ It's like I got 1 cheek cuz I took this shit goin half ass .................... |
uppin this........................................
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and again..........................................
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up'n..1........................................... ...................................
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This was feedback posted for Tekneek
close battle, i think youkay wins tho, only cuz the MJ lines are played out and boring now, otherwise Wing would of hada better chance, close battle ere good job both of ya's
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Voted For: Tekneek
i'm giving this to youkay for his closer..that was the best punch/bar out of the whole entire battle..other than both of you came extremely weak...and i would strongly reccomend seeking help from a more respected text head, or from the audio help forums on here or rapbattles.com |
Voted For: Winglistik
Winglistik got it easily...I shouldn't even have to explain. Tek, your verse was weak man. You had no personals and no decent punches, which are key aspects to winning battles. Winglistik, your verse wasn't perfect, but it was good enough. You had a few personals with the name flips, and you had a few punches, however, there's room for elevation. But uh, yeah...You won. |
Voted For: Winglistik
^^got this man punches were much more harder and direct...flow was a lil off in the last 2 lines but structure was ok...plus he had interesting wordplay on there and opner was tighter with the multiz put in there...closer was also cool too...with the play on tekneek.. nice battle tho.. |
Voted For: Winglistik
This was a very good battle. nice drops from both ends. but... W= had better punches and multieds that kept me going..OH!...and AWW! SHIT!... he had flare and creativity. you.kay it seem like you tried to pusha punch rather than letting it flow off well. V/ W. for better Originality and punches! |
are you 3 serious? this was a whack battle..and wing wasn't close
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^^ Get off his dick, buddy.
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