R-Rated vs Tekneek
 

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Check in by: 07-03-05 at 04:37 PM

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Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 07:39 AM.

R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 02:39 PM.

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.

This was feedback posted for R-Rated
 

Kind of weak, both had some played lines. But its all good no hate. I think that R-Rated took this out just barely and I know for a fact this wont be a KO.

Both needa up their rhyme game, but ® did have better punches than tekneek. Tek, you needa think of better concepts than "your shits so boring" and I wouldnt of even tried to use the restricted line cause every emcee whos ever battled this dude has prolly used that atleast once.

Basically, up ya creativity and rhyming to both, but I aint gonna say this was a bad battle.

v/R-Rated

Cant vote- Guess I'll have to get more posts.

This was feedback posted for R-Rated
 

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aight lets get these votes in........................

Voted For: R-Rated

Tekneek:
Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
Eh...Not doing it for me. 7/10. Okay opener.

This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
Okay personal. 8/10.

where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
Sort of self-glorification here...pretty good though. 8/10

jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
All and roll doesn't really rhyme that well. Not really original at all...5/10

your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
[/b]Okay. 7.5/10[/b]

Overall: 7.1...

Info: I didn't like how you self-glorified in your verse...you didn't come all that original, and the roll-all line really ruined the whole thing and brought your overall average down a lot.


R-Rated:
This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
Okay...pretty good opener. Second line was okay. 7.5

In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
Not feeling it all that much. Okay. 7.2

This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
Pretty good personal...8/10

Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
Pretty good...the Re-Tire line has probably been used a good few times before. 7.5

In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
Okay closer. 7.2

Overall: 7.5

Info: Okay battle. You didn't self-glorify as much as Tekneek, and you had some okay lines.

My vote goes to R-Rated because the higher average and shit... good battle.

uppin this.............................................. ...................

Voted For: R-Rated

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
-Played. The set up Lines was messed up for me cause of the grammar. And the punchline (2nd line) was played out.

This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
-Hmmmmm Really wasn't a effective punch, couldnt find it insulting. Weak


where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
-Ok Played wordplay and weak punch

jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
-Weak Punch.

your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
-Ok for once, this was a good punch nice wordplay and a good closer.

=overall this verse was weak from the start, punches weren't connecting. Wordplays are played. The closer is what stood out the most though.




This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
-Hmmmm I like the 1st line, the 2nd line was ok the concept was played though, but word differently


In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA nice punch, decent


This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
-Decent punch


Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
-I see glor which didnt make a punch in the 2nd line but i like the wordplay you did on the 1st line


In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
-Lol Nice wordplay and a good closer

Overall= I liked your verse, had some decent punches loved the g-unit line and the halloween line too. Creative and decent.

Ok my vote goes to R-Rated. He had better punches than TekNeek, with decent wordplays and good punches. Tekneek i felt your punches were weak and the grammar is what the main problem is. The wordplays was played, but until the closer which was good but still wasn't enough to beat R-Rated.


Bye.

ummmmmmmmm....blah blah...........................

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